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Teen Poetry #5

What A Mess I've Made

StellarChica
Member

since 2002-07-06

Posts 207
floating down a river...

0 posted 2002-07-26 01:36 AM

I wrote this one awhile ago. It's pretty short and simple.

Emotions overflowing,
Going over the edge,
Exploding,
Spilling all over you,
You just grab a towel,
Wipe yourself off,
Walk away.

*~erin~*

"Longing for home again but home is a feeling I buried in you."-Greenwheel

fearing-laughter
Senior Member

since 2001-04-24

Posts 605
land of cheese (Wisconsin)

1 posted 2002-07-26 11:13 AM

hey,
i really liked this, i think it might be one of my favorites i've read from you, besides the "were you scared?" piece. eh, i guess this has happened to the best of us though. some people are just not very good at handeling other's emotions? i don't know what exactly makes them do it, but grr! it'd be great if they stopped now. thanks for sharing this! twas cooly.
-bergundy-

maybe i'll catch fire, something nice to warm me. something pure to burn away the darkness, that hides inside my mind. -alkaline trio-

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