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Chel2082 Junior Member
since 2002-07-23
Posts 40Baltimore, MD |
Yesterday you were standing next to me As we stared up into the sky It seemed as though the world was falling Everything became silent as if we were the only ones here Today you stand next to me as we hold candles As we stand in a circle to mourn As we tell stories, happy and sad Everything became silent as if the people in the circle were the only ones here Tomorrow I can feel you next to me As you breathe into my soul You were the person we were telling stories about You were the reason everything became silent If it weren't for yesterday, there wouldn't be a tomorrow With GOD all things are possible....please feel free to make any comments on my work..I can't do better if I don't know whats wrong...<3 CHEL |
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
fisrt of all WELCOME TO PASSIONS!!! Glad to see you join our family of friends. I hope you enjoy this place as much as we do. As one of your Senior Moderator, if you have any questions, just e-mail me. Have fun sharing and readng as well. You post has got me thinking hard I see all the potential in your work Just keep writing, practice makes perfect thanks for sharing ps. pls check your email là où est mon amour? |
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Lady In White
since 2001-02-12
Posts 2799USA |
Chel, an interesting first write here at Passions... I'm going to look for more of your work... Welcome! |
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