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FadeN2you
Junior Member
since 2002-07-15
Posts 15


0 posted 2002-07-20 02:08 PM



Life's a little blurry.
And I'm struggling to let go.
Maybe if you weren't so distant,
you'd be able to know.

But one day you're so hot,
and the next day you're so cold.
And I don't have the strength to read you,
and your games are getting old.


But life's a little quirky,
and I'm struggling to keep in.
Life's a little hectic,
when everyone is trying to win.


Yeah, I wrote this on a wimb, I think it explains a lot about society today though.

--FadeN2you

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NewEnglandlazurlu
Member Rara Avis
since 2002-01-04
Posts 7470
A Mountain Paradise
1 posted 2002-07-20 08:11 PM


It sure explains a lot. And your written words sound very much like the verbal words of my son.
This was very good and I enjoyed reading it. Life can be very quirky, but believe me, it gets better with age!!!
Hugs, Marti

"Even if life is full of thorns, I still embrace it for I know that in between those thorns, there is a rose worth all the pain."

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