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allie
Member

since 2001-07-09

Posts 218
Australia

0 posted 2001-07-14 09:28 AM

To look at you,
Is to see a million things;
I could have done,
I should have done.
Is to watch a million seconds;
Of what we used to be,
What we no longer are.

To touch you,
Is to feel a million things;
I've felt before,
And long to feel again.
Is to feel a million memories;
Of passion and love,
Things we've forgotten.

To be near you,
Is to be close to a million things;
close to love,
And yet close to pain.
Is to be close to a million words;
Words of happiness,
Now turned cold.

Six million things,
I could have avoided,
If you'd loved me.

branden726

Senior Member

since 2000-09-25

Posts 607
Bay City, MI

1 posted 2001-07-14 10:01 AM

This is a fantastic poem ya know welcome aboard i cant wait to see more from you..

All you other poets beware my true feelings and poetry are about to flare!
~*~Branden~*~

anonymousfemale
Member Elite

since 2000-02-02

Posts 2797
Limbo

2 posted 2001-07-14 11:33 AM

Welcome to Passions!!

Your first piece is really sad. It is unfortunate the trials that love puts ahead of us.
I'll be looking forward to your active role in this community.

~AF~

Psychopathic chickens are plotting against me...

little_krazy_poet
Junior Member

since 2001-05-28

Posts 41

3 posted 2001-07-14 01:44 PM

yes yes welcome welcome
i loved this poem for yours i can really relate to the subject. i really hope to see more from you and keep you head up.

WRITE WHAT YOU FEEL!! AND DON’T LET ANYONE TELL YOU TO DO OTHERWISE

WHEN YOU LIVE, YOU DIE
WHEN YOU DIE, YOUR FORGOTTEN
AND WHEN YOUR FORGOTTEN

pure_innocence
Member

since 2001-07-14

Posts 80
Colorado, US

4 posted 2001-07-14 01:56 PM

I'm new here too!!!! I now realize that I am in the company of some real talent! I have an ex that I miss very much but I know that I can't live in his world, that I don't want to, but everytime I look at him or think back, I can still feel his touch and taste his kiss. Your poem reminded me of this. Thanks for sharing. Loved your poem. I hope to see many more by you.

anonymous albert ?

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since 2001-03-23

Posts 2979

5 posted 2001-07-14 02:31 PM

WELCOME TO PASSIONS!!
...this was VERY sad...so much went behind this...i really liekd the poem...youe xpressed yoruself..nicely...hope to see you read,share and reply more

im addicted to passions in poetry!...are you?

Spice
Senior Member

since 2001-04-13

Posts 1266
Resting in my cardboard box.

6 posted 2001-07-14 11:03 PM

Welcome to PIP!

Such a sad poem. A wonderful first post. you did a great job here on expressiong your feelings/emotions. Keep 'em coming.

Fading Away

Member Elite

since 2001-03-14

Posts 3131
Lynchburg, Virginia

7 posted 2001-07-16 02:33 AM

Welcome to Passions in Poetry!!

I really liked this first post. it's well written... and the ending rocked! Nicely done. I look forward to reading more posts and replies from you

Nice work.

--Marie

You can’t expect the roses to grow without the weeds.

Dopey Dope

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Member Patricius

since 2000-08-30

Posts 11132
San Juan, Puerto Rico

8 posted 2001-07-17 08:17 PM

I liked this one! Great first post here!
I hope to see you participate a lot and post more in the future!

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