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mistic
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since 2001-05-06

Posts 233
Idaho, U.S.A.

0 posted 2002-05-16 06:12 PM

Ok here's one in complete contrast to the last one i posted. It's actually a happy one that i dug up from a pile of dust... hmm haven't been writing much happy ones lately... oh well.

I'm here to brighten your days,
To turn your frowns around
So that your smile shows,
Even if it's just to me.
I'm here to build bridges
Over your roughest waters
So you have a place that
Will keep your head above drowning waters.I'm here to catch you when you fall
And rescue you when you can't face your darkest hour.
When everyone else turns away
And it seems like no one even cares,
I'll be there to wrap you in my arms forever
And always hold you, comfort you, and love you.
Nothing will ever pulll me away
From always being there, making sure you're alright.
When your legs are too weak to keep on walking
And things never go the way you want,
And when you feel like dropping in the sand
And giving up all hope,
I'll be there in a flash to lift you up with my wings,
So you never again have to feel you've hit rock bottom.
When the road seems too rocky
And too long to continue going down it
Find a rock to sit on and take a break from it all,
Turn your head and find me sitting there beside you
With open arms, giving you my strength to carry on.
When you are surrounded by a freezing storm
And can't find shelter,
Look and you will find me ready to offer my shelter
With the comfort of my arms,
Restoring hope in your heart, keeping you warm
And when that storm is over,
You'll see my smile is a rainbow,
Bringing happiness and brightness back into your world.
Always you will find me,
No matter what the situation,
Offering my love,
And doing everything I can to keep you
From hitting rock bottom
And cheering you up at the same time.
That is why I've come to you once again,
To be your everylasting angel.

ok so i just repeated myself a thousand times. but oh well

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Ina
Senior Member

since 2000-10-09

Posts 1236
Quebec, Canada

1 posted 2002-05-16 06:16 PM

This wasnt a bad poem at all. Its something you want your good friends to be like and yourself always being there to help and sort things out. good work.

Regina

xShUgArHiGhx

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since 2000-09-26

Posts 3150
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2 posted 2002-05-23 10:20 AM

You are truely an amazing friend and have a lot to offer the world. Great poem..i enjoyed it a lot

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