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Le Capitan de L'Amour
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0 posted 2002-05-10 06:05 PM


Every other week I see you;
I see your green eyes that once in a while let your thoughts slip out of your mind;
Mysterious eyes which I see with great devotion,
goddess of my heart;
Once in a while I look at the perfect slopes of your body;
Once in a while I look at your angelical face that reminds me that there is a heaven out there;
Once in a while I try to touch your soft silky smooth desirable skin;
Once in a while I wish I could kiss you;
Once in a while I wish you knew that I like you;
Once in a while I wish you knew that I love every second I spend with you;
Once in a while I wish that I could snap out of you; my dreary dream that with delirious desire have me as a fish in the net;
What I’m I saying? Is not only once in a while, what I mean to say is: I will Forever, Always Love you!.

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1 posted 2002-05-11 06:02 PM


this was so good! gosh i wish i had someone to fell that way about me......
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2 posted 2002-05-12 05:01 AM


Really good one!!!
You're a very romantic poet.

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3 posted 2002-05-15 11:27 AM


Even though i have a boyfriend i do not think he feels that passionately about me..not even the slightest!! That is pure passion for ya!! Loved the poem

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