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0 posted 2002-04-18 01:42 PM


Morning madness,
Screams and yells.
Up for 20 minutes,
Already in hell.
Schools ahead,
Long grusome days.
Barely make it,
Walking through fog and haze.
"Friends" and socialization,
Talk and walk through time.
More abuse to come,
More poison to my mind.
Responsibility beckons,
Tiredness overwhelms me.
Try to go into my own world,
But this one call's upon me.
Only a few more hours,
Finally will i meet my slumber.
Calmness comes too late in the day,
Too late and pointless to recover.
Finally able to escape from life,
Safe in my bed.
Tomorrow will come,
And it'll face it all again.

iTs bEeN 1 Of ThOsE dAyZ 4 2 MaNY dAyZ nOw..I jUst NeEd a DaY whErE tHe WOrLd cAn tAkE cArE of ItsElf..

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1 posted 2002-04-18 01:58 PM


Life can be so tough at times. Nicely said!

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2 posted 2002-04-18 04:28 PM


"it seems youre having some trouble dealing with the changes living with these changes" sorry just reminded me of that song...once again...good job =oÞ

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in tearing silence
3 posted 2002-04-19 02:18 AM


the "daily routine" can be really frustrating.. especially of course if it sucks! Go on and make it through another day..

"Pain doesn't hurt when it's all you've ever felt" ~Marie, the girl of a thousand truths           

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4 posted 2002-04-19 12:39 PM


This one was awesome. That's like everyday for me. I totally connected with this.
Jon

"Only God can judge me" Tupac Shakur
"Sometimes it takes a painful loss to realize you are free"- Bouncing Souls

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