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Teen Poetry #5

Cautious

Allysa

Senior Member

since 1999-11-09

Posts 1952
In an upside-down garden

0 posted 2002-04-14 01:58 PM

Can't let you know how I feel
you wouldn't understand
but what hurts the most
is the fact that you never tried.

Jenn Cirrincione

Member Elite

since 2000-07-02

Posts 2107
Fl

1 posted 2002-04-14 09:54 PM

Short, simple thoughts.
Powerful sentiment.

Jenn

"I can't get you out of my head- your love is all I think about."

xShUgArHiGhx

Member Elite

since 2000-09-26

Posts 3150
tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs

2 posted 2002-04-14 11:05 PM

Short and sweet and describes the painful truth wonderfully. ::hugs:: I loved it

iTs bEeN 1 Of ThOsE dAyZ 4 2 MaNY dAyZ nOw..I jUst NeEd a DaY whErE tHe WOrLd cAn tAkE cArE of ItsElf..

Cinderelly
Member

since 2001-12-31

Posts 189
NM, USA

3 posted 2002-04-15 01:05 AM

I love this poem! It's short and gets right to the point . . . Great write!

Life is a moderately good play w/ a badly written thrid act. - Unknown

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