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BrokenAngel
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since 2002-01-06
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Puryear, TN, USA

0 posted 2002-04-08 06:28 PM


With out day there is no light
With out love there is no hate
With out good there is no evil
With out life there is no death

This world is full of controversies
Nothing can exist without the opposite
They all need something to exist
They cannot be with out the other

We live in a world where everything comes with a price
To get something we want
We must loose something
At least, that’s what I have always been told

But with every system there is a hole in the weave
Some people find it
Some don’t
But I think I have

See they left something out when they told me this lesson
Something that I have now found out myself
Something I never thought I would find
Something I want more than anything

They said with out love there is no hate
And that may be true
But there is something that needs no opposite to be
And that’s me and you

We don’t need hate to love
Love is just there
We don’t need evil for good
I guess good was just handed to us on some special deal

How ever it happened
I don’t care
The only thing I care about
Is me and you

You will always be
My cowboy angel
So if I may quote some one else’s lines
“Cowboy take me away”

By: Night Angel  

(Dedicated to “Briar“)

---Night Angel

© Copyright 2002 Hannah Rochelle Garner - All Rights Reserved
Lisa_bebe15
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since 2001-11-15
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1 posted 2002-04-09 11:57 AM


Hey..this is really good...I really love this..It made me think of a guy that just left me... *sighs8 nice write
Lisa Ann

"Water Over Matter"

BrokenAngel
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2 posted 2002-04-09 06:45 PM


Thanx Lisa.  Hope everything works out with you!!

~*~*~Night Angel~*~*~

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3 posted 2002-04-09 09:50 PM


This was great!! All those things you said are very true...how everything has a price. Nicely written

iTs bEeN 1 Of ThOsE dAyZ 4 2 MaNY dAyZ nOw..I jUst NeEd a DaY whErE tHe WOrLd cAn tAkE cArE of ItsElf..

BrokenAngel
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4 posted 2002-04-10 06:08 PM


Thanx Sugar

~*~*~Night Angel~*~*~

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