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Lisa_bebe15
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0 posted 2002-04-07 10:51 AM



Always holding a place in our heart,
But not always our eyes
Knowing we will be together again soon,
But never soon enough
Each time we are not together
Time passes by so slowly
But when together, hours seems like minuets
I never want to take my eyes off of you.
Never loosing sight of you until you walk away,
When you cannot be seen any longer.
Tears start flowing down my cheek

Where ever you go,
I will be there.
Not always in your eyes,
But always in your heart.
Even though we are not together,
Doesn’t mean our love doesn’t reach

Our love is in a new flower that just bloomed,
Our love is in the ocean with each new wave crashing upon the beach.
Look around, our love reaches us every day.
We just don't see it.
The ocean just got a little bigger,
Because of the tears that have joined the sea.

But until we meet again,
We always know our love will find a way.
A way to get to each other.
Not always in words,
But in the everyday life around us.


"Water Over Matter"

[This message has been edited by Lisa_bebe15 (04-08-2002 12:55 PM).]

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1 posted 2002-04-07 11:13 AM


"Where ever you go,
I will be there.
Not always in your eyes,
But always in your heart.
Even though we are not together,
Doesn’t mean our love doesn’t reach"

I LOVE this part!
very heartfelt poem

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2 posted 2002-04-07 11:53 AM


*sigh*
This is nice.
Good work.

Jenn

"I can't get you out of my head- your love is all I think about."

LCBS
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3 posted 2002-04-07 07:26 PM


This was really good, it shows that long distance relationships can survive...Great job


however, did you mean somethig different here:    
Each time we are together
Time passes by so slowly
But when together, hours seems like minuets
I never want to take my eyes off of you.


Should the first line say: Each time we ARE NOT together?

Just thinking...


~Lisa

Dunphy
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4 posted 2002-04-08 09:58 AM


you know that's all true about long distance relationship i know what you mean. time does go bey slow. but keep your self occupied an time will come quicker then you know it. if you love some one you can wait an do it i know you can because i can. i have faith in you. god does to. just take my advice it will work maybe nawt at firss but it will in time.

love kevin reid
aka dunphy

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5 posted 2002-04-08 12:49 PM


cute girly very good!

i am me don't tell me different!!
JEFF IS ONE HOT STUD *RAWR*
i want him *DROOLZ*
dam hes hott!!!

Lisa_bebe15
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6 posted 2002-04-08 12:56 PM


Hey thanks for telling me about my typo error..It was sopsto have a "not" in it..you were right..thanks!
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"Water Over Matter"

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