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parody to "Thank You"
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parody to "Thank You" |
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chas Member
since 2001-04-08
Posts 101Lynn, ma |
i came home one day from playing basketball and turn on the radio, Thank you by DIDO came on so i wrote this, this is just for giggles.. My game gone cold, I'm wondering why I want to play ball at all, The basketball court is callin out my name, but i can't shot the ball, And even if I could i'll miss all day, and maybe even get blocked, and when i do it reminds me that I'm so bad, that I'm so bad, I ate to much last night, it's effecting my game, and now my stomach's all in pain, I missed the shot to win the game, So they won't let me play again, And even if they did, they'll all imply that maybe i should step aside, And then I walk off the court cus I'm so bad, cus I'm so bad, and then they all thanked me for leaving the court, so i left but i said i'll be back again, Push the door, I'm home at last and I'm sweating through and through I grabed myself a towel and all I see is shame, And even if my game came back, I wouldn't know what to do, so I guess i'll sleep it off until tomorrow come, so i can see if my dream came true. |
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Alyssa
since 2001-05-30
Posts 385IM ENGAGED!!!!! |
very good i like this piece its kina cool  "I wanna be bad"-willa ford |
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Angel Bee Member
since 2001-01-30
Posts 176Virginia |
cool poem keep writing *ab* *~"Sometimes I wish I was a little girl again--because bruised knees heal faster than broken hearts."~* |
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anonymous albert ?
since 2001-03-23
Posts 2979 |
i enjoeyd the poem...nice job on expressing yourself  im addicted to passions in poetry!...are you? |
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Spice Senior Member
since 2001-04-13
Posts 1266Resting in my cardboard box. |
Cute write. HaHa- Thankgod someone made a parody to that song- I HATE it. |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Great job here Chas.....the parody was great. I'll be thinking of this next time I hear that song  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. |
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~sugarpie313~ Member
since 2000-09-14
Posts 375Maine, USA |
this was super! hahaha i love it. i'm getting sick of the song because it's sooooo overplayed. along with backstreet boys "the call" ugh. LOL but anyways... cool job. Valerie "...And i want to take you down, but your soul could not be found, doesn't matter much you see cause your disease is killing me..." -Saliva |
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Acies
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
practice makes perfect...don't give up specially if you love doin it. hi Sweets, Lizzy, Kris, Ina, Erin, Erica, Minna, Kit, Kamie, Javi, Jenn, Sharon, Nan, Cawlee, Cherish, Ashley, Sara, Justine, Leah, Jess, Kimmie, Mare |
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Kevin
since 1999-11-02
Posts 729Torrington, Ct, Usa |
THIS IS HILARIOUS...i guess cause i like dido and bball...im rofl...this is great |
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Fading Away
since 2001-03-14
Posts 3131Lynchburg, Virginia |
Nicely done, Chas. I really enjoyed this one.. I like that song Don't give up on what you love. Thanks for the read.--Marie You think yourself a failure, but perhaps the biggest loss is winning. |
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thedragonthomas Junior Member
since 2001-07-30
Posts 15 |
OH MY GOD I NEVER LAUGHED SO HARD! this is sooooo funny! well, thats all! write some more parodies! later |
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Low Man's Lyric Member
since 2001-04-03
Posts 236In a dream |
Ha ha great job man, I enjoyed this. "Right now I'm having amnesia and deja vu at the same time. I think I've forgotten this before." |
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Jessica
since 2001-06-28
Posts 350South AL |
Great poem... I really enjoyed this one.  |
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