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...in my boxers...

0 posted 2002-03-21 02:58 AM


Slowly, you crawl to me
Desperately wanting to be
truly be you.
A need for you to be true.

With love, I offer my ear
With hope, any good cheer.
Over in the corner, a keg of beer.
Along with my pet Beaver Seer.

Always a hug at ready,
forever we sing a medley.
Get as close as you feel able,
rest the bones in my house stables.

Rest here in my arms,
allow me to work my charms.
Merely for the magic of the moment,
come with me, join my constant movement.

With me, get some hope.
For I long to see you float.
Through the dark and through the light,
we can take this journey to great heights.

Slowly, you crawl to me
Desperately wanting to be
truly be you.
A need for you, to you, to be true.

3 -20- 02

[This message has been edited by PoetryIsLife (03-21-2002 03:00 AM).]

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1 posted 2002-03-21 08:15 PM


Another homerun TITUS!!!!!!!!!

WOOHOOOO Great Poem...I loved it....

~Lisa

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2 posted 2002-03-21 08:23 PM


I love it! The message is clear, but you played around with it some, which I thought made it even more interesting.

Where are you?! Get online! I'm leaving tomorrow so I might not see you again for a long time.

Talk to you soon. (hopefully)

Cela passera.

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3 posted 2002-03-21 10:30 PM


AND TITUS DID IT AGAIN LADIES AND GENTLEMEN!!!!!! ***CROWD GOES WILD***...Yet another brilliant piece!!

iTs bEeN 1 Of ThOsE dAyZ 4 2 MaNY dAyZ nOw..I jUst NeEd a DaY whErE tHe WOrLd cAn tAkE cArE of ItsElf..

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4 posted 2002-03-22 01:35 PM


HI Titus! See... I told you I'd be online occasionally. *hugs* Very awesome poem. Talk to you later.

I'm sick of the acting I can't seem to stop, and I'm sick of the people who all expect me to fit what they belive of me. I'm sick of everyone, includi

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5 posted 2002-03-23 11:05 AM


Nice, indeed..need I say more..my words fail me now as I'm crawling upon this broken glass of what used to be my soul..but anyways enjoyed it...*hugs*

Kris

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6 posted 2002-03-24 04:31 AM


Really good ... I like it a lot ..thx for sharing

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