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Dunphy
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since 2002-03-14
Posts 82
Massachusetts USA

0 posted 2002-03-20 02:15 PM


i'm unda tha blue
wit out no crew
yo baby gurl i do luv you
you know iss hawd to break my hawt
awl mixed feelinz awr awl appawt
awl i ask for you iss for a fresh clean stawt
you b thinkin that i'm not so smawt
why do i deserve thiss
awl i ask for iss one friendley kiss
now wuss wrong wit that
all i'm sayin i'm to youn to get down like dat
word wit life why so hawd
awl you fine gurlz i'm gonna let you have all my fine chawmz
i'm gonna see you wit a daimon ring bling bling
i'm going to set ya awl free.

                        from kevin reid
                         aka dunphy
                          18 m mass usa
          

[This message has been edited by Dunphy (03-20-2002 02:17 PM).]

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ShortSexyAngelOnEarth
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since 2001-12-24
Posts 36
im a louisiana cajun princess! lol
1 posted 2002-03-20 03:59 PM


lol, cute poem, thats all i can say, lol, makes me think of a persistent guy who wont leave me alone...... lol

Maryn
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2 posted 2002-03-20 04:37 PM


awwwwwww what a cute poem!!! hehe marry me!! :P

i am me don't tell me different!!
JEFF IS ONE HOT STUD *RAWR*
i want him *DROOLZ*
dam hes hott!!!

Nan
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Cape Cod Massachusetts USA
3 posted 2002-03-21 01:16 PM


Geesh, Kevin... How am I supposed to read this slang stuff... You sound like a city kid... Keep those 'happy' words coming...
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tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs
4 posted 2002-03-21 03:47 PM


LOL @ NAN i was jus thinkin the same thing..i live a half hour away from NYC and i dont hear many people talk like that even lol. Hey its your own style kevin and i like it!! Sweet poem..keep it up!

iTs bEeN 1 Of ThOsE dAyZ 4 2 MaNY dAyZ nOw..I jUst NeEd a DaY whErE tHe WOrLd cAn tAkE cArE of ItsElf..

Impulse Pro
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since 2002-03-22
Posts 25
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5 posted 2002-03-22 03:39 PM


nice poem, hoppfully you dont really spell like that
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