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0 posted 2001-07-11 06:41 PM


( Brian )
OH, baby
Where have you been all of my life
HEY, lady
Say what about dinner tonight
I’ll treat you real nice,
So what do you say,
Me you at the movies.

( All )
Baby I’m dyeing to love you
And love is all that I have to give
Yeah I’m dyeing to love you
Promise I’ll be real I’ll be sensitive
Every drop of love is true, ( baby )
I’m dyeing to love you

( Haidar )
UH, honey
Do you wanna go out on a date
OH, baby
I really hope it’s not to late
Know the perfect place,
So what do you say,
Me you please say yes.

( All )
Cause I’m dyeing to love you
And love is all that I have to give
Yeah I’m dyeing to love you
Promise I’ll be real I’ll be sensitive
Every drop of love is true, ( baby )
I’m dyeing to love you

( Ali )
All I want is one romantic night
To show you that I’m true
Just look into my eyes
And you’ll find nothing but you.
( Cause baby )

( All )
I’m dyeing to love you
And love is all that I have to give
Yeah I’m dyeing to love you
Promise I’ll be real I’ll be sensitive
Every drop of love is true, ( baby )
I’m dyeing to love you

( All )
I’m dyeing to love you ( dyeing ) ( to love you )
And love is all that I have to give ( all I have to give )
Yeah I’m dyeing to love you ( yeah baby )
Promise I’ll be real I’ll be sensitive ( promise ) ( I’ll be sensitive )
Every drop of love is true, ( baby ) ( every drop )
I’m dyeing to love you

( Michael )
I’m dyeing to love you
( Ali )
I’m dyeing to love you
( Haidar )
I’m dyeing to love you
( Brian )
I’m dyeing to love you

© Copyright 2001 Brian Eggertsen - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2001-07-11 06:47 PM


This is something you'd have to hear to fully appreciate the art within it. Wonderful job though. I could picture it.

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2 posted 2001-07-11 07:49 PM


you do this so well   I like this  
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3 posted 2001-07-12 02:21 AM


songs you write are great ...i liked it...and mp3..please?!

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4 posted 2001-07-12 03:27 AM


All honesty? The song was fine...but the fact that Dying was spelled dyeing throughout the whole thing really turned me off to it.
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5 posted 2001-07-24 08:00 PM


This is one of those I'd love to hear sung.  Got an MP3?

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6 posted 2001-07-29 02:21 AM


I would also like to hear this on MP3.  It didn't strike me as a song I would praticularly like... This isn't your best.  Thanks for sharing, though..

--Marie

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