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-Queth-
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since 2002-02-10
Posts 35
Canada

0 posted 2002-03-14 10:16 PM


We three kings of Orient are
TRYING TO TAKE OVER THE WORLD
With a cuban cigar.
We rode on for days
ON CANADIAN WAVES
To reach golden lands afar.

Ooh, Ooh
Sandles filled with yucky sand
BURSTING SEAMS OF CARELESS MUD
Westward stealing, still proceeding
In blue sketchers, to this land.

We three muskets became quite the pair
TOO BAD THERE ARE MORE THAN TWO HERE
Strangely seeking, yelling, speaking
Ice and me, and Queth do fear.


Hehe...[Ice Box], Leah, and I were bored one night and decided to sing to old tunes. Actually, Leah doesn't sing, but that was okay. Neither did we! I liked the way this one came out...I wrote the italicized lines.

[I wrote the all-caps. I was a little hyper when we did this, so hehe. Whoopsies. Good to be back for a bit.]

*I was the boring one...I had no special HTML to mine...;_; *sadness* But that's okay! I had fun...The other two are nuts...don't listen to them. THEY'RE EVIL. ^^;

-whacks Leah-

*OW. o_O;

That is all. -grins-


Q.u.e.t.h.

Everything in between.

[Ice Box]

Chill.

Leah

Va pensiero sull' ali dorate...

© Copyright 2002 -Queth- - All Rights Reserved
LCBS
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since 2001-11-29
Posts 532
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1 posted 2002-03-14 10:32 PM


Wow, poetic genious!  And ummmmm WOW!  Need I say more, GREAT JOB!!!!


~Lisa

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2 posted 2002-03-15 11:28 AM


Great collaboration guys!!!! you work great together

iTs bEeN 1 Of ThOsE dAyZ 4 2 MaNY dAyZ nOw..I jUst NeEd a DaY whErE tHe WOrLd cAn tAkE cArE of ItsElf..

cherish
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since 2001-03-25
Posts 1639
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3 posted 2002-03-16 04:09 AM


ROTFLMFAO!!!


this is as funny as hell.... ...you three should collaborate more often! this is soooo in my library!

Zombie

Torn are her limbs
By quiet hands that
Tug life(color) out of her.
Gnawing edges round
Into a broken(satisfying)
Shadow

knightlyshadows
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since 2001-04-14
Posts 791
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4 posted 2002-03-17 12:12 PM


lol i agree this was great and yall should collab more often. *tweaks* very good job. this is in mah library. *hugs leah* you were great even without the special html sweetie
..tiff..

“A single choice can build destinies,or destroy them.”

I know Im not perfect but I can smile
& I hope that you c this heart behind my tired eyes

chasing rain
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since 2001-05-15
Posts 737
Canada
5 posted 2002-03-18 12:35 PM


Bonjour bonjour! ^__^

-Queth- you numbskull! ^^;

I can't believe people are actually reading this...o_O; DANG YOU OTHER PEOPLE WHO HAVEN'T! Hehe. *halo* ^^ Meh, people have no sense of humour.

TIFFERS! ^_____^ *huggles tiff*

Geez, I haven't been here for a long time...
So...
MEEP!!!

Oh yeah...who rocks now? ~_^


-Leah

ps- Thanks to all who commented so far...I hope you're all still sane. o_O;
pps- Did anyone understand what I just said? oO; Probabalooty not...

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6 posted 2002-03-18 10:04 PM


"We three muskets became quite the pair
TOO BAD THERE ARE MORE THAN TWO HERE"

POETS AT WAR! lol So creative of you guys; thought this was VERY unqiue.

"We three kings of Orient are
TRYING TO TAKE OVER THE WORLD
With a cuban cigar.
We rode on for days
ON CANADIAN WAVES
To reach golden lands afar."

Note: 3 people collabs like two cubby boys eating ONE hamburger. It got kinda crazy o_O;  

[This message has been edited by anonymous albert ? (03-18-2002 10:08 PM).]

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