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Allysa

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since 1999-11-09

Posts 1952
In an upside-down garden

0 posted 2001-07-11 01:37 PM

Spent the day with you yesterday,
did all the things I dream about,
except for one.

We hung out on the porch swing,
you let me rest my head on your shoulder,
while you rocked us back and forth.

We drank apple juice,
which Andrew spilled on you,
and had an apple juice fight.

Then you helped me and Donna,
while we finished her chores,
so we could all go swimming together.

You, Andrew, AJ, and Ronald left before us,
because we still had to wash the windows,
and her father didn't want you to help us.

We met up with you at the pool,
and I stood in line with you at the snack bar during break,
where you bought a snickers bar.

When break was over we went back into the pool,
and you swam with me and we had fun,
it was like everytime I turned around, there you were.

You picked me up and threw me,
and dunked me in the water for a while,
and we both just laughed our heads off.

Then Donna had to leave,
so AJ and I were gonna go to,
and I came to say goodbye.

I hugged you and told you I had fun,
then I hugged Andrew and told him I had fun messing around with him,
and you were like "When did this happen?".

You were sure you had been by me,
every single second that I was there,
and you hadn't seen Andrew anywhere.

I laughed and told you this,
"see what you miss when you close your eyes",
the turned and walked away with AJ.

I hope you don't mind that me and him are friends,
and that I rubbed sunblock on his back at the pool,
because you wouldn't look at me for a few minutes.

I hope you don't mind that I don't like him,
I like you and only you,
and that the lotion thing was just so he didn't get burned.

If you would've asked,
I would've rubbed suntain lotion on you too,
I would've done that gladly.

And when I was getting ready to leave,
and I was hugging you,
I ALMOST kissed you on the cheek.

But I didn't,
and I know why,
it's because I'm scared.

AJ and I ran to catch up with Donna,
him in flipflops,
me trying not to loose my towel.

And when we got back home,
I rubbed more lotion on his back,
the whole time wishing that he was you.

You, Andrew, and Ronald weren't supposed to come back till seven,
but you knew I had to leave at five,
and no matter what you say I know that's why you came back at four thirty.

I had the best day of my life yesterday,
I knew that while I was having it that it was the best day of my life,
because I was spending every second of it with you.

(For Justin!)

Someone once taught me that it doesn't matter what other people think of you as long as you like yourself. That's what I live by.

Dopey Dope

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Member Patricius

since 2000-08-30

Posts 11132
San Juan, Puerto Rico

1 posted 2001-07-11 06:41 PM

This was completely sweet Allysa. Wow.....very sweetly done here. I enjoyed this a lot!

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

Somewhere out there a cow is laughing at you

Alyssa

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since 2001-05-30

Posts 385
IM ENGAGED!!!!!

2 posted 2001-07-11 07:52 PM

allysa sis, this is great, simply great.
very nice i liked the part where u ALMOST kissed him on the cheek...i feel like i was there!
ur sis
Aly

"Like, yeah."-the famous cheerleaders
"And if I say yes, what do I get?"-again the famous cheerleaders

branden726

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since 2000-09-25

Posts 607
Bay City, MI

3 posted 2001-07-11 07:53 PM

Niiiiiiiiiiice i like this one.

anonymous albert ?

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since 2001-03-23

Posts 2979

4 posted 2001-07-12 02:20 AM

sweeet...great job on writing this...enjoyed much be me

im addicted to passions in poetry!...are you?

Spice
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since 2001-04-13

Posts 1266
Resting in my cardboard box.

5 posted 2001-07-12 03:33 AM

Allysa this was incredibly sweet.
I'm glad you had such a great day.

Allysa

Senior Member

since 1999-11-09

Posts 1952
In an upside-down garden

6 posted 2001-07-12 03:37 PM

I am such a COWARD!!!!

I ALMOST kissed him but I didn't, and it's starting to bother me now b/c I didn't kiss him and I want to soooooooo incredibly bad!!!!!!! UGHH!!!!!! I don't know how I live like this, you guys, I have no idea, honestly!!!! It's so horrible!!!! I am such a disgrace to the female kind.

UGHH!!!

Rid me of my cowardness, QUICK! i need your help!

Someone once taught me that it doesn't matter what other people think of you as long as you like yourself. That's what I live by.

Acies

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Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-07

Posts 7665
Twilight Zone

7 posted 2001-07-21 09:55 PM

Allysa, you bad girl

cheating on your man already

lol j/k
really sweet poem Allysa
keep us posted

hi Sweets, Lizzy, Kris, Ina, Erin, Erica, Minna, Kit, Kamie, Javi, Jenn, Sharon, Nan, Cawlee, Cherish, Ashley, Sara, Justine, Leah, Jess, Kimmie, Mare

Kosetsu
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since 2001-03-10

Posts 450
Alabama, USA

8 posted 2001-07-22 12:23 PM

This was a great one Allysa. I like the casual feel of it, giving the names as if it were a story already half-told.

Keep it up
-Kosetsu

"They always run. Everyone fears this power they do not understand. This power so above them it makes them quiver. This power causes the strongest of

Kosetsu
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since 2001-03-10

Posts 450
Alabama, USA

9 posted 2001-07-22 12:28 PM

bleh..my new quote's too big..

anonymousfemale
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since 2000-02-02

Posts 2797
Limbo

10 posted 2001-07-23 06:09 AM

Almost?!?! You didn't?! ARGH! Take the bull by the horns and show him who's the man! lol

The way you told the story was really well done. Too bad about the situation though. You've got to lose that shyness if you want anything to happen.
Good luck with him.

~AF~

Tearless grief bleeds inwardly.
~ Christian Nevell Bovee ~

Allysa

Senior Member

since 1999-11-09

Posts 1952
In an upside-down garden

11 posted 2001-07-23 04:06 PM

I am too shy. UGHH!

I've never been shy before, I don't know why it had to start now. And he's the only one who can make me blush too!

I gave him a black notebook full of poems that I wrote for him and I was talking to him on the phone one day and he was cleaning his secret hiding place or something (which is a cupboard in the kitchen??) and he came across that notebook. He just started to read the titles of the poems and I started to blush soooooo bad and I told him so.

And i told him to stop because it was making me blush, but he wouldn't, so I hung up on him and he got a little bit mad. but it was funny.

Someone once taught me that it doesn't matter what other people think of you as long as you like yourself. That's what I live by.

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