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Erin
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0 posted 2002-02-16 04:16 PM




I never did really love you,
I just used you for all that you had.
Now your saying I broke you heart,
but its just to bad.
*~*~*
I can also play,
play this what you call a game.
But then I broke your heart,
and its just a shame.
~*~*~
First you moved,
and then I happened to score.
If you dont like it,
why do you keep coming back for more?
*~*~*
But then you quit,
you just quit the game I was playing.
And then what came out of it,
just the hurtful words you started saying.
~*~*~
Its just to bad,
that I was the one who won.
So put away the pieces,
the game is over and done.
*~*~*



~ShAtTeReD mEmOrIeS,
aRe AlL i HaVe LeFt,
Of YoU aNd Me.~

[This message has been edited by ERIN (02-16-2002 04:17 PM).]

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1 posted 2002-02-17 12:03 PM


I'm glad you won the game, and great poem...

But have you ever felt what it feels like to lose?


~lisa

Exeryone makes mistake, learn from them and move on, because tomorrow we'll make more...

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2 posted 2002-02-17 12:16 PM


I understand where your coming from and even though cheating makes me sick to my stomach..i am still happy u won. If he's done this to you before and you were doing this for some payback..then he def deserved what he got and you get a really big "YOU GO GIRL!" but if you just did it to him for the fun of it then i say "tsk"...lol but w/e im done... great poem

mE & cHrIsTiNe GaVe A WhOlE nEw mEaNiNg tO ThE wOrD "iNcOgNiTo"

Erin
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3 posted 2002-02-17 04:08 PM


I got this idea from a freestyle song...And then part of it reminded me of some guy I used to be with so it all played out good!!! He used me in the beginning and I got him back...LOL But no I dont play "the game", never had and never will...Thanks for taking the time out to read my work!!!

~ShAtTeReD mEmOrIeS,
aRe AlL i HaVe LeFt,
Of YoU aNd Me.~

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