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sleepymoongirl
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0 posted 2002-02-07 12:23 PM



no one seems to understand
but then again
no one seems to care
walking through this life of mine
so lost so unprepared
not sure what this life is going to give me
not really sure what to expect
i'm so scared i'll lose everthing
that i'll be left alone
so scared to b alone
yet in some ways think
it would probably be safer
i'm not sure what i'll do
if you hurt me again
how i will stand
i don't want you to know this pain you cause me
so cold hearted towards me
you don't even know me
you don't even care
so ready to make judgements against me
so ready to ruin my life
wanting to keep my life together
all i ask is that you leave me alone
let me be
let me live

as u go in life there will be ur hardships it is up to u if it makes u or breaks u.  

© Copyright 2002 Scarlet Saunders - All Rights Reserved
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Twilight Zone
1 posted 2002-02-07 09:36 AM


No one can make you feel bad unless you allow them to
I hope things get better for you
thanks for the beautiful read
keep em coming

là où est mon amour?
donde está mi amour?
wo ist meine Liebe?
Nelly Furtado é a menina a mais bonita no mundo largo do todo.


gymnast
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since 2001-11-18
Posts 80
Scotland.
2 posted 2002-02-07 12:46 PM


I'm sorry things are bad for you and I'm not just saying this but I know how you feel.  Hang in there cause things will get better although it may take time!  A lovely poem tho!  I really liked it!
knightlyshadows
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since 2001-04-14
Posts 791
obscured vision
3 posted 2002-02-07 01:17 PM


*hugs scarlet*    
just wanted to point out something hun.
"as u go in life there will be ur hardships it is up to u if it makes u or breaks u." <~ this is your signature.. it's true scarlet, only you can decide if it makes or breaks you. you wrote this well hun, made it possible for us to feel your anguish and pain. hope everything turns out for the best hun.
tiffany

“A single choice can build destinies,or destroy them.”

I know Im not perfect but I can smile
& I hope that you c this heart behind my tired eyes

LCBS
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since 2001-11-29
Posts 532
Connecticut
4 posted 2002-02-07 01:38 PM


Not everyone doesnt care...we're here for you!  Great emotion...

~LCBS

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tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs
5 posted 2002-02-07 10:39 PM


Im gonna echo wat she jus said ^...we definately care for you

mE & cHrIsTiNe GaVe A WhOlE nEw mEaNiNg tO ThE wOrD "iNcOgNiTo"

sleepymoongirl
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since 2001-04-19
Posts 157
bc canada
6 posted 2002-02-09 01:43 PM


thank you guyz i was just feeling so low that day because i let things build up till they get to the point where i feel worthless and didn't know how to fix things but thank you for your concern =D and hey tifferz =D
DawnG
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7 posted 2002-02-17 10:13 PM


If people are your real friends or care about you, you should tell them when they hurt you cause otherwise they can't change their behaviors

                    Dawn

gracianna
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since 2002-02-17
Posts 165
A 14 year hell
8 posted 2002-02-17 10:26 PM


Sounds a bit like a poem I posted a little earlier...

I give a whole new meaning to the word 'sad.'

HiddenSparklez
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since 2000-12-29
Posts 190
British Columbia, Canada
9 posted 2002-02-18 12:52 PM


You may think that nobody understands, but as you can already see, everybody understands how you feel.

"You do what you do, you say what you say, you try to be everything to everyone... come on now, do that stupid dance for me" -Everclear

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