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Dark Enchantress
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0 posted 2002-02-03 01:00 AM


Thick roses bleed out
onto cold, black concrete,
at least in your eyes
Blink again to resurface,
leaving only the residue
of heavy rains and lies
you entertained quite simply
to make it all okay
Only to find that despite
them falling all over for you
and claiming truth,
there exists, apparently,
far too much of the real you
No reputation or golden shrine
could ever make you so devine
that they'd stay and do as they do
No, not after they know
what it means to be loved by you
- their walking kryptonite

-- the calm before the storm --

jaimespoetry.blogspot.com

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Dark Enchantress
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since 1999-07-27
Posts 1258
meet Morgana
1 posted 2002-02-03 01:02 AM


I'll be the first to admit that it's crap and you can all feel free to agree with me. I don't know. I was just going on a vibe. One of those say-the-first-thing-that-comes-to-mind poems. This is something I was brooding on earlier today, which is what led to this. Anywho, enjoy.. I guess..

P.S.- "you" is me... just in case you were wondering


-- the calm before the storm --

jaimespoetry.blogspot.com

[This message has been edited by Dark Enchantress (02-03-2002 01:11 AM).]

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