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Ina
Senior Member

since 2000-10-09

Posts 1236
Quebec, Canada

0 posted 2002-01-30 07:55 PM

snow falls empty on the side walk
an eery feeling of death looms in the air
the mile, the distance, the snow
it all ends here my friend
with hands numb from the cold
mind filled with a new sharpness
this will be your last step
blood rolls off your finger tips
turning the snow a bright red
She pulls off her jacket
the blood stops flowing
there are gashes all over her body
torn clothing for the struggle of life
her heart beats to fast
there's a new feeling of tranquility
the sky orange, the ground red
this death is not accepted
the forecast is shady and stormy
dead eyes stare through life
her defenses are up
ready to fight, again
the sway of a broken body
the swagger of an angry mind
the determmination of revenge
the chaos in order, the order in chaos
no proof
A pattern of health, a puzzle
If only i could quit getting myself
in trouble.

Regina

SEA

Moderator

Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

1 posted 2002-01-30 10:09 PM

Regina, this is such a deep writing, I don't think you mean it as you are hurting yourself, more that you have been hurt....and more so, that you are a fighter....in that respect, I liked this very much

Fading Away

Member Elite

since 2001-03-14

Posts 3131
Lynchburg, Virginia

2 posted 2002-01-31 11:05 AM

Regi, this is beautiful. It's motivating for me... you're a fighter, that's evident. Keep fighting, and hanging in there

Beautiful work. Another for the library..

--Marie

I wish your fingers could touch all I can't say... no one should ever feel this alone.

Jenabou
Member

since 2000-06-13

Posts 215
Oklahoma/Nova Scotia Canada/USA

3 posted 2002-01-31 05:56 PM

This is absolutly wonderful. YOU GO GIRL...no matter how bad things seem to get for you you never give up.Thats amazing...lotsa motivation in this one
Thank you.

*for someone who's used to heartache,losing it all was just a matter of time*
Be kind,for everyone you meet is fighting a harder battle

xShUgArHiGhx

Member Elite

since 2000-09-26

Posts 3150
tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs

4 posted 2002-02-02 04:13 PM

This was very well written Regina..very descriptive..nicely done

BoOsH bOoSh nApoLE

keoni
Senior Member

since 2000-10-16

Posts 850
Up in the mountains in the NFC

5 posted 2002-02-03 03:13 PM

Ina, very nice as always.Very colorful descriptive poem. Looks like you went back to writing the darker poetry.Very well written.

"Only God can judge me" Tupac Shakur
"Sometimes it takes a painful loss to realize you are free"- Bouncing Souls

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