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sad brown eyes
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since 2001-12-14
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Connecticut U.S

0 posted 2002-01-24 09:32 AM



If you left me what would I do?
I would be lost with out you.
Your my love, my life, my faith.
My heart couldnt take such a hard break.
My world revolves around you and a gave basically everything up for you.
My old life is no more and my new one isnt that fun.
If I gave up everything to be with you, and you gave up everything for me.
Then why do u want to leave?
My heart hurts so muchknowing you can walk away.
But why?
Did you not mean what you said to me?
I asked and you said you did.

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HiddenSparklez
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since 2000-12-29
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1 posted 2002-01-25 03:09 AM


Sounds like a tough situation... I hate miscommunication, because it always leads to pain.... good job explainin' it tho.

"You do what you do, you say what you say, you try to be everything to everyone... come on now, do that stupid dance for me" -Everclear

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2 posted 2002-01-26 11:41 PM


This really does sound like a sticky situation ::hugs:: Hope things work out

yOu GeT wAt u PaId 4 bUt i JuS hAd nO..iNtEnTion oF liVin tHis waY --Counting crows

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