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Dark Enchantress
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since 1999-07-27

Posts 1258
meet Morgana

0 posted 2001-07-07 10:55 PM

   Poison my silky skin
and dirty my delicate looking hands
Give me something more
something I can drown in
and hide away from everything,
      from myself, from yesterday
No matter what I grab
there's always the question
The question that drives me mad,
the restlessness and hunger -
  my need to know why
Ignore me and I'll give you hell
Answer me and I'll steal you

       steal you away

Feed me...

    I'm starving here..

"...if you want love you must be love.."
Billy Corgan, Smashing Pumpkins

Freedom comes when you learn to live unafraid.

anonymous albert ?

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since 2001-03-23

Posts 2979

1 posted 2001-07-07 11:43 PM

...*shivers*...hahaha...the expression was VERY dark...and had some deep emotions in it...i enjoyed it a LOT.

im addicted to passions in poetry!...are you?

Heavens Tears

Senior Member

since 2001-03-15

Posts 677

2 posted 2001-07-08 03:44 PM

I enjoyed this one. It was an interesting format, but it fit the poem very well. Nicely done.

*Amanda*
I need more time to find the real me...
to fly like the birds... to be set free.

Spice
Senior Member

since 2001-04-13

Posts 1266
Resting in my cardboard box.

3 posted 2001-07-08 10:26 PM

OOooo I really liked this. I dunno what it is exactly- But I just really really liked this. Great job!

anonymousfemale
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since 2000-02-02

Posts 2797
Limbo

4 posted 2001-07-09 10:14 PM

Wooo...if this got any colder we would have to throw it in the oven to heat it up! There are tons of wows escaping my lips at the moment. Your expression is so dark and amazing that it really makes the words jump off the page!

Excellent work, Dark. This is going into the library for sure!

~AF~

Never speak disrespectfully of Society. Only people who can't get into it do that.
~ Oscar Wilde ~

Spine Grinder
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since 2000-10-28

Posts 1127
Standing In Silence...

5 posted 2001-07-09 10:23 PM

OOOOOOOO this was dark.........I LOVED IT! i love all ur pieces so far...........keep it up pleez! thanks 4 the read.

fall hard, practice harder not to fall
Don't belong, Don't exist, Don't give a S***, Don't ever judge me -Slipknot
death is certain, life is not.

mistic
Member

since 2001-05-06

Posts 233
Idaho, U.S.A.

6 posted 2001-07-10 01:53 PM

this is a really interesting piece.. i liked it. keep writing

Dopey Dope

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Member Patricius

since 2000-08-30

Posts 11132
San Juan, Puerto Rico

7 posted 2001-07-10 07:58 PM

Wow this was relaly nice. The ending was so errie.......haha I got this feeling you wanted to eat that person you were talking to.
I liked it.

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

Fading Away

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since 2001-03-14

Posts 3131
Lynchburg, Virginia

8 posted 2001-07-15 08:35 PM

WOW! What an awesome way to end a poem! WONDERFUL job!! I enjoyed this VERY much. Keep sharing your work with us!

--Marie

You can’t expect the roses to grow without the weeds.

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