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sad brown eyes
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0 posted 2001-12-20 01:38 PM


For so long i was blue.
But then i met you.
At first i was holding back my love for you but, i couldnt because i really love you.
I mean my feelingzare like a rose starting to bloom.
It keeps growing and growing and i dont know what to do.
I mean, i cant bare to lose you.
Your my world, my life the reason i live.
We also had our bad times and i know that.
But i promise, no more of that.
No more angryness or tears.
Its all about jeers and cheers.

        renee


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1 posted 2001-12-21 06:15 AM


Great work, I really enjoyed the read, hope to read more of your work in the future.
Zu

"No army can conquer a galaxy, yet faith alone can overturn the universe"

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tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs
2 posted 2001-12-21 08:09 AM


Aww very cute poem!!!

ShE'S nOt ThE kInDa GiRL..WhO lIkeS tO tElL tHe WorLd AbOuT tHe Way She FEEL'S aBouT hErSelf...ShE tAkEs a LiTtLe TiMe In MakIn uP hEr MiNd..

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3 posted 2001-12-26 11:10 AM


very sweet indeed

là où est mon amour?
donde está mi amour?
wo ist meine Liebe?
Nelly Furtado é a menina a mais bonita no mundo largo do todo.


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4 posted 2001-12-26 01:40 PM


Isn't it amazing how one person can make such a difference in one's life?  
I enjoyed this, as always... very sweet!

--Marie

If there's one thing I've learned, it's that the most frustrated people in the world are those who know they're stupid, but keep trying anyway.

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5 posted 2001-12-26 01:50 PM


i too enjoyed this very much, it makes me think of the people i love and how much they mean to my life, i'm glad you have someone like that!
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