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Lil_Angel123
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since 2001-12-16
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0 posted 2001-12-16 07:28 PM


I have too many {edit}problems
No one can see them
i cover them up
just like i cover up the sadness
just like a cover up my pimples
its there
only one person knows its there
and that is me
no one knows the real me
i never show it
i dont want anyone to feel bad for me
i know that i have too many {edit}problems
that no one can solve
and i know that they are there
and i know that its hurting me
and i know theres nothing i can do
you dont have to tell me
All i do it cover them up
it works
until one day
i explode and tell the wrong person
and then word will get out
that i have...
too many {edit}problems!
~Amanda~

[This message has been edited by Alyssa (edited 12-17-2001).]

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lone_poet707
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since 2001-11-17
Posts 70
black hole named Aylmer
1 posted 2001-12-16 09:11 PM


I am the exact same way...if ya need anything, im here for ya! anywho, excellent piece...
  -Joe

Alyssa
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IM ENGAGED!!!!!
2 posted 2001-12-17 11:48 AM


Hey!!!!! Welcome to Passions!!!


Glad to have you here.
Check your email!!!

[This post has been created by Alyssa, be joyous she has graced you with her pressence!!!]

TopGunLauren
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since 2000-08-02
Posts 718
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3 posted 2001-12-17 09:22 PM


I know exactly what you are talking about I cover up everything and sometimes I expload.But I don't tell someone when I expload I go off on people it's not a good thing.I wish I could tell you how to no keep everything inside but if I knew how to do that my life would be so much easier and more happy.SO if you ever need someone to talk to feel free to e-mail me because I'm exactly the same as you are.Oh and I love this poem it's one of my favorites keep up the awsome work.
   Lauren

"I just needed someone to talk to you were just to busy with yourself."-Staind


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tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs
4 posted 2001-12-18 10:02 AM


I know how your feelin too...i use to cover up all my problems and let them eat me away on the inside but i grew to express myself so that way i wouldnt let them over-take me and i think its an important thing to learn...but i have to admit i still sometimes fall subject to letting them over power me and then hiding them away so i dont have to deal with them..i guess everyone does it..nicely written poem...well done

ShE'S nOt ThE kInDa GiRL..WhO lIkeS tO tElL tHe WorLd AbOuT tHe Way She FEEL'S aBouT hErSelf...ShE tAkEs a LiTtLe TiMe In MakIn uP hEr MiNd..

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Twilight Zone
5 posted 2001-12-21 02:32 PM


You at least need to show your true self
Some problems we can handle on our own
But some we do need help
This is the time we have to show up as ourselves
No hiding behind any wall, or mask
thanks for the read

là où est mon amour?
donde está mi amour?
wo ist meine Liebe?
Nelly Furtado é a menina a mais bonita no mundo largo do todo.


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