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Kicking Kim
Member

since 2001-04-16

Posts 426
Cloud Cucko Land!

0 posted 2001-07-06 12:03 PM

The mirror stares at me
speaking its wordless ryhme
looking into my eyes
and seeing more than just a picture.

~~~

It crashes to the ground
shattering into refracting rainbows
bonding and repelling
into a spectrum of broken light.

~~~

More than just a rainbow
More than just a complexion
More than just a spectrum
More than just a reflection.

"Theres no posession, just obsession and growing depression"

TopGunLauren
Senior Member

since 2000-08-02

Posts 718
California

1 posted 2001-07-06 06:08 PM

This is such an awsome poem and I'm hapy to be the first one to get to reply.This poem like the rest of yours I have read have a very strong message and I loved all of them.So keep up the awsome work!
Lauren

~sugarpie313~
Member

since 2000-09-14

Posts 375
Maine, USA

2 posted 2001-07-06 06:45 PM

GREAT poem. it totally kicked majah booty. (yes i'm a mainah) *L* it's like your lookin in the mirror hoping to see more but you don't. not until like someone breaks that mirror by saying some other stuff then you see that there is more to you then just what you perceive. there's a whole 'nether side to you. well that's what i thougth when reading this anyway! *L*

Valerie

"...And i want to take you down, but your soul could not be found, doesn't matter much you see cause your disease is killing me..." -Saliva

Fading Away

Member Elite

since 2001-03-14

Posts 3131
Lynchburg, Virginia

3 posted 2001-07-06 10:54 PM

This is awesome! The message is outstanding. The way you talk about the mirror breaking, and then the last stanza breaking it down. Very nice work. I enjoyed this a lot.

--Marie

You can’t expect the roses to grow without the weeds.

fozzyozzy
Member

since 2001-03-15

Posts 336
Lessburg Virginia

4 posted 2001-07-07 12:48 PM

I'm digging the groove here. Awesome job here. I wish there was more i could say, but it left me pretty speechless. Good job

"and Death i think is no paranthesis"-e.e. cummings

anonymous albert ?

Member Elite

since 2001-03-23

Posts 2979

5 posted 2001-07-07 02:58 PM

strong message...and this was just awesome

...wonderful job!...enjoyed by me.

im addicted to passions in poetry!...are you?

Heavens Tears

Senior Member

since 2001-03-15

Posts 677

6 posted 2001-07-07 03:03 PM

The mirror stares at me
speaking its wordless ryhme
looking into my eyes
and seeing more than just a picture.

I loved these lines. The poem had an excellent flow and everything, but it was the message that I wanted to comment on. It was wonderful! Ok, what more can I say?? Great job!

*Amanda*
I need more time to find the real me...
to fly like the birds... to be set free.

LoneWolf
Member

since 2001-03-10

Posts 384
IL

7 posted 2001-07-08 12:57 PM

I liked this a lot. Great job.

It's too bad I'm not as wonderful a person as people say I am, because the world could use a few people like that.
I've learned that even when you th

Dopey Dope

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Member Patricius

since 2000-08-30

Posts 11132
San Juan, Puerto Rico

8 posted 2001-07-09 06:52 PM

Well done here Kim. Another poem that appeased my apetite....

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

Acies

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Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-07

Posts 7665
Twilight Zone

9 posted 2001-07-16 02:03 PM

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