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crazymin83
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0 posted 2001-12-14 10:44 PM



Friends until the end

We are always there for each other
You understand me
And I understand you

We always are together
This year will be like a bumpy road
Because we are going to graduate

There are two roads
To a friendship
College and moving to another town

I don’t think we will lose touch
Our friendship holds a key
You and I are best friends.

And we will be  friends till the very end

Your friend,
Minna
September 30, 2001

This is about my friend Kelly she is so nice

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keoni
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1 posted 2001-12-15 01:13 AM


That's a sweet poem. You should definately show this to her.
Jon

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"Sometimes it takes a painful loss to realize you are free"- Bouncing Souls

TopGunLauren
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2 posted 2001-12-15 03:29 AM


This is a very special and sweet poem and I'm sure your best friend would love to read it. And I reallly liked this it's a good write.
  Lauren

"I just needed someone to talk to you were just to busy with yourself."-Staind


SmileyClar
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3 posted 2001-12-15 01:54 PM


Thats all nice, ya know, untill the end actually ends up being closer than graduation or college of even drivers license.  
Sorry, Its one of those days, regardless, I like the poem. Its so cool that your friendship is so strong!

Smiley-Most of the time
Clarinet-All the time

Moonlight Angel
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4 posted 2001-12-15 07:09 PM


I like the poem. Probably because i can relate. My friend moved, and is going to another school soon. :'(

thIs Is hOw yOU rEmInd mE
          Of whAt I rEAlly Am...

Acies
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5 posted 2001-12-21 04:29 PM


great tribute Minna
Hope you and Kelly do remain friends forever

là où est mon amour?
donde está mi amour?
wo ist meine Liebe?
Nelly Furtado é a menina a mais bonita no mundo largo do todo.


crazymin83
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6 posted 2001-12-21 05:25 PM


her and I may agrue but she comes right back to me and we say sorry. in the hall ways we always say "hey how was that teacher? grumpy, or good mood". when I miss my dad she's always there to help me.
Acies
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7 posted 2001-12-22 01:27 PM


she's a keeper then

là où est mon amour?
donde está mi amour?
wo ist meine Liebe?
Nelly Furtado é a menina a mais bonita no mundo largo do todo.


vixengrl04
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8 posted 2001-12-22 07:16 PM


Awww this was sweet.  Remember that true friends are stronger than distance, in which case you and ur friend have nothing to worry about!!

~*Nikki*~

     *~Fighting for your love~*
    *~Is something I cannot do~*
   *~I'm not good enough to win~*
*~And I'm not strong enough to lose~*

Kaos
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9 posted 2001-12-23 04:21 AM


i like this...my best friend is moving back to chicago after graduation...so i felt a lot more connected to this poem...nice work

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tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs
10 posted 2001-12-25 11:15 PM


Very sweet poem minna!! I definately think that this should be shown to her..i know she'd love it!

ShE'S nOt ThE kInDa GiRL..WhO lIkeS tO tElL tHe WorLd AbOuT tHe Way She FEEL'S aBouT hErSelf...ShE tAkEs a LiTtLe TiMe In MakIn uP hEr MiNd..

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11 posted 2001-12-26 12:46 PM


Friends are very special.  Especially the ones that you know will always be there.
It's great to see you post again, Minna!  I haven't read your work in forever, and I miss you!  I hope all is well.  *hugs*
Enjoyed, as always!
Post again soon...

--Marie

If there's one thing I've learned, it's that the most frustrated people in the world are those who know they're stupid, but keep trying anyway.

crazymin83
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12 posted 2001-12-26 03:25 PM


thanks for all your replys. Kelly and I are really good friends I can tell her everything and she won't tell anyone. One vacation her and I stayed on the phone until 4am! We were very tired but neither one of didn't want to sleep. During the summer we lost our friendship, and didn't think we could get it back. But when we went back to school we began talking again, calling each other, iming each other. This November we went to Disney Land together with our graduating class and we were room-mates. I had so much fun, she is my best friend and probably re-main it.

"If you can dream it, then you can believe in your dreams. Crazy D"

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