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A New Beginning
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IsGona Senior Member
since 2000-07-14
Posts 723
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~A New Beginning~ A certain reality is growing from my depths A sort of realization of my fate A self-defined destiny A world of sorrowful memories is draining Into a puddle of painful tears Leaving my soul cleansed I embrace this renaissance And write in my tabula rosa HOPE Washing away the puddle with that which is pure I reveal the many paths at my feet Choosing love I walk proudly Reaching and hoping for your hand. 'Every body has their destiny... |
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Jenn Cirrincione
since 2000-07-02
Posts 2107Fl |
Jason- Hi there.  I wasn't sure what to do upon reading your name gracing these forums. Yeah. Been a long while huh... Well I'm not certain what to make of this piece, and I do hope you'll enlighten us all a bit. I liked it though, and I saw a sort of calm happiness to it. ~I reveal the many paths at my feet Choosing love I walk proudly Reaching and hoping for your hand. ~ I liked this. Love is worth reaching for. Don't be a stranger ok? Nice write. Jenn "I want love on my own terms; after everything I've ever learned. Me, I carry too much baggage..." |
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anonymousfemale Member Elite
since 2000-02-02
Posts 2797Limbo |
Very interesting, Jason. Love is a tricky thing but I hope you find what you're looking for. It's good to see you around our forums again. I look forward to more work from you soon. ~AF~ Caution: Filling is hot. |
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crunchiL365 New Member
since 2001-12-14
Posts 3 |
Jason, Very inspirational peice. Ihope that you could elaborate on it a little more though. Keep doing what you do and keep your head above ground. |
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MindlessPoet Member
since 2001-04-20
Posts 106Texas |
I thought that was really cool. And what's tabula rosa or whatever? Pink tablet? But it was nicely written. For now, all I can do is dream. |
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cherish Senior Member
since 2001-03-25
Posts 1639swimming in fairy floss........... |
 long time no see jay!"Washing away the puddle with that which is pure I reveal the many paths at my feet Choosing love I walk proudly" i loved the way you wrote this. very simple but full of meaning. its good to see you posting again.hope to read more! |
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Child of the Stars
since 2000-09-07
Posts 1658Ann Arbor, MI |
Hey you!!! Alive!!!  This was another great piece, Bubba...I'm glad things are making sense. Hope to catch you on icq sometime, man. I miss talkin to ya.. ~Carly Speak softly and carry a beagle. |
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IsGona Senior Member
since 2000-07-14
Posts 723 |
Well, first of all, thanks to every on the replied. I really appreciate it. I miss all of you too. Don't expect me around too much though; I'm really busy. As far as the poem: I think it's pretty simple. It's about getting over many years of sorrow and seeing life clearly again. Oh and tabula rosa is supposed to mean blank tablet. It's pronounced like it's spelled but I don't know if it's spelled like it's spelled. My psychology profesor used the term to describe an infant’s brain the moment it is born. It's used in a lot of textbooks as well, and the idea is we write in our tabula rosa (from the moment we are born until we die) the lessons we learn. Thanks again Jason [This message has been edited by IsGona (edited 12-17-2001).] |
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xShUgArHiGhx
since 2000-09-26
Posts 3150tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs |
Great poem!! Nice to see you postin Keep the poems comin!ShE'S nOt ThE kInDa GiRL..WhO lIkeS tO tElL tHe WorLd AbOuT tHe Way She FEEL'S aBouT hErSelf...ShE tAkEs a LiTtLe TiMe In MakIn uP hEr MiNd.. |
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