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Baby_Angel123
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0 posted 2001-12-07 05:19 PM


               Forgive me

I'm sorry,
i'm such a rotten daughter,
and can't do anything right.
I'm sorry,
i'm not a straight A student,
that never gets in trouble.
I'm sorry,
for being such a disappointment,
and for not being the daughter,
that you always wanted.
Can you ever forgive me?

© Copyright 2001 Heather - All Rights Reserved
TopGunLauren
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1 posted 2001-12-07 06:46 PM


No matter what your parents want be the kind of person you want to be because no one is ever perfect in there parents eyes.My parents are the same way and I don't care what they think anymore I do what I feel is right and what I need to do even if they don't like it.Be your own person it might be hard but eventually hopefully your parents will except you for who you are not who they want you to me.But anyway awsome poem I really like it keep up the awsome work.
  Lauren

"I just needed someone to talk to you were just to busy with yourself."-Staind


anonymousfemale
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2 posted 2001-12-08 08:17 AM


Oh hun *huge hugs*
Although this piece tells of much pain parents aren't perfect either. Between child and parent there is usually such an age bracket that they forget what it was like to be young. Just remember that although you may think they are disappointed in you know, they probably see what a great human being you truly are.

Keep writing and keep strong for us all. Vent away if you need to.  

~AF~

Why does Sea World have a seafood restaurant? I'm halfway through my fish burger and I realize, Oh my gosh....I could be eating a slow learner.



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3 posted 2001-12-13 03:44 PM


Have you ever sat dow with your parents and have this conversation with them
You know that communication is best
hope you settle things with your parents
good luck and keep sharing

là où est mon amour?
donde está mi amour?
wo ist meine Liebe?
Nelly Furtado é a menina a mais bonita no mundo largo do todo.


Jenn Cirrincione
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4 posted 2001-12-13 09:59 PM


Oh I hate this feeling.  
Remember your parents will always love you no matter what, ok?
Nice job on this.

Jenn

"I want love on my own terms; after everything I've ever learned. Me, I carry too much baggage..."

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5 posted 2001-12-16 05:31 PM


I hope you're doing better! No matter what you do, I'm sure you'll always be loved, if not by them, then by other friends and family, and those of us on pip! Keep your head up, and keep your focus strong. Good luck, and good job.

Sincerely,
Titus

Lil_Angel123
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since 2001-12-16
Posts 13

6 posted 2001-12-16 07:04 PM


Hey Sweetie~
i know exactly how you feel. Dont be sad. Whenever you need to talk ill be here. Youre parents are just like mine! Ill talk to you later.
   ~Amanda~

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