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knightlyshadows
Senior Member

since 2001-04-14

Posts 791
obscured vision

0 posted 2001-07-06 05:54 AM

ill dream of you this very night
until the morn we meet again
youll hold my hand and kiss my brow
while whisperin' i love you in my ear

i close my eyes and wait to pass
into the slumber of this deep
knowing that you will be there
to watch me bodily as i rest

i dance a walze in this sleep
swirling and twirling in your arms
losing my soul in your eyes
shrouded by mists of a dreamers dream

i wake to find you by my side
a smile on your lips as you dream away
whisps of love still in my mind
fragments of reality that are only a dream

“A single choice can build destinies,or destroy them.”

I know Im not perfect but I can smile
& I hope that you c this heart behind my tired eyes

the_rescue
Member

since 2001-05-23

Posts 316
Japan

1 posted 2001-07-06 08:45 AM

really good stuff tiff I liked it. personally I am hoping to get out of the love poems stage lol. but it's all good I guess. I really liked the poem it flowed good and everything else.

I'm not asking U 2 luv me I'm just letting out the truth no hold barred about what I feel nothing wrong with what I say

Linc

Senior Member

since 2001-03-07

Posts 552
The Backstreet Boy

2 posted 2001-07-06 10:59 AM

Hey Tiffany,

Get it!

-- Linc

       "Blood Moon"
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Kicking Kim
Member

since 2001-04-16

Posts 426
Cloud Cucko Land!

3 posted 2001-07-06 11:56 AM

This was a veryu good piece I enjoyed it very much. It was a strong poem! Keep writing!

^*~Kicking Kim~*

"Theres no posession, just obsession and growing depression"

never_a_princess
Member

since 2001-06-09

Posts 82
Show Me the Money

4 posted 2001-07-06 04:55 PM

good poem, tifferz! *liked* it flowed "well" (not good. be grammatically correct, ppl. not that hard!) whoa. sorries. *settles* :P *hugz* stay sweet.
__o0o_Anna_o0o__ *waves*

TopGunLauren
Senior Member

since 2000-08-02

Posts 718
California

5 posted 2001-07-06 05:06 PM

This is such an awsome poem I really enjoyed reading it.Keep up the awsome work.
Lauren

Spice
Senior Member

since 2001-04-13

Posts 1266
Resting in my cardboard box.

6 posted 2001-07-06 08:25 PM

So many love poems... Spring is over people! hehehehe
I liked this alot Tiff. Terrific write!

Fading Away

Member Elite

since 2001-03-14

Posts 3131
Lynchburg, Virginia

7 posted 2001-07-06 10:39 PM

LOL @ Jess

This was VERY sweet, Tiff! I enjoyed the read... each line was heart felt... nicely done

You're a talented poet... keep posting all your work.

--Marie

You can’t expect the roses to grow without the weeds.

CwboyAtHeart
Senior Member

since 2001-04-14

Posts 541
Selah, WA, USA

8 posted 2001-07-07 02:53 AM

I really liked this, quite a strong piece. Keep up the good work.

- Cody -

If Pigs Can Fly, So Can I!!!

If someboy laughs at me, does that make me funny or just plain stupid?

anonymous albert ?

Member Elite

since 2001-03-23

Posts 2979

9 posted 2001-07-07 02:29 PM

beautiful display...very sweet yet...my fav lines was...

"losing my soul in your eyes
shrouded by mists of a dreamers dream!

i loved how you expressed yourself in this one

im addicted to passions in poetry!...are you?

Marshalzu

Member Elite

since 2001-02-15

Posts 2681
Lurking

10 posted 2001-07-07 02:32 PM

Great work I really enjoyed the read Tiff, I liked the way you expressed yourself and how you maintaine the flow... one for the library me thinks

Zu

"Here we are again finding ourselves at the end Of the wrong stick I guess it's far too late I'm building up the barricades In my head" -My Vitriol

Heavens Tears

Senior Member

since 2001-03-15

Posts 677

11 posted 2001-07-07 03:20 PM

This was a beautiful poem. Keep up the great work!

*Amanda*
I need more time to find the real me...
to fly like the birds... to be set free.

LoneWolf
Member

since 2001-03-10

Posts 384
IL

12 posted 2001-07-08 01:09 PM

This was great. I really liked it.

It's too bad I'm not as wonderful a person as people say I am, because the world could use a few people like that.
I've learned that even when you th

Dopey Dope

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Member Patricius

since 2000-08-30

Posts 11132
San Juan, Puerto Rico

13 posted 2001-07-09 06:54 PM

Beautiful poem here. I really enjoyed this Tiff.

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

Acies

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Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-07

Posts 7665
Twilight Zone

14 posted 2001-07-16 05:55 PM

Such sweet words expressed. Beautiful and serene poem. I loved it. Thanks for the beautiful read.

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