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Spine Grinder Senior Member
since 2000-10-28
Posts 1127Standing In Silence... |
No matter how hard I try, It seems like I'll never win. I'll never win your heart, I'll never have your love again. When you looked me in the eyes, Why couldn't I just say no? You broke my heart, instead of friend, you became foe. But I don't know, WHAT DO YOU WANT ME TO DO? It seems nowadays, all I do is fight with you..... ~If u luv something, let it go,if it comes back 2 u, its urs, if it doesnt, it never wuz..~DMX |
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TopGunLauren Senior Member
since 2000-08-02
Posts 718California |
Sounds like you are going through a tough situation and I hope evrything gets better for you really soon.And if you ever need to talk to anyone I'm here.But I like this piece a lot. Lauren |
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branden726 
since 2000-09-25
Posts 607Bay City, MI |
Hey, I feel your pain it seems as if the ones you feel iffy or feel that you love but its wrong and then you find out they really arent the best its like getting kicked .... yeah you know where huh? Well nice poem best of luck! All you other poets beware my true feelings and poetry are about to flare! |
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anonymousfemale Member Elite
since 2000-02-02
Posts 2797Limbo |
Ouch! Sometimes it's better to go through all of these experiences and feelings. That way we gather wisdom. Wisdom is a great thing.  Take care and thanks for sharing. ~AF~ Why does Sea World have a seafood restaurant? I'm halfway through my fish burger and I realize, Oh my gosh....I could be eating a slow learner. |
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Dark Enchantress Senior Member
since 1999-07-27
Posts 1258meet Morgana |
Fighting is horrible when you're not getting anywhere and this is a tricky situation to be in. I hope that one way or another you find what you're looking for. Thanks for sharing this poem. I enjoyed reading it. The only thing that I fear is to die quietly. |
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TopGunLauren Senior Member
since 2000-08-02
Posts 718California |
Yeah fighting sucks but anyway I really like this piece keep up the awsome work. Lauren "I just needed someone to talk to you were just to busy with yourself."-Staind |
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Fading Away
since 2001-03-14
Posts 3131Lynchburg, Virginia |
I know it's hard, but sometimes you just have to admit that things aren't right for you, and won't work out. If the "friendship" is more of a hassle than a pleasure, then it's not worth it. I'm sorry you've been put in this situation... no one deserves it. Good luck Well done. --Marie If there's one thing I've learned, it's that the most frustrated people in the world are those who know they're stupid, but keep trying anyway. |
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katherine Member
since 2000-06-10
Posts 365Canberra Australia |
It's never fun when it turns to fighting. But is it really worth fighting or would it be better to just walk away. nice poem even if it is a panful topic. it'll all get better |
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xShUgArHiGhx
since 2000-09-26
Posts 3150tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs |
Sounds like your in a tough situation...i feel for ya hun..hope things work out ShE'S nOt ThE kInDa GiRL..WhO lIkeS tO tElL tHe WorLd AbOuT tHe Way She FEEL'S aBouT hErSelf...ShE tAkEs a LiTtLe TiMe In MakIn uP hEr MiNd.. |
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
I hope you both settle your differences Communicate or discuss, don't argue  thanks for the read là où est mon amour? |
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