»
Archives
»
Teen Poetry #5
»
Little Voices
| Teen Poetry #5 |
|
Little Voices |
|
|
sweetlilangel Junior Member
since 2001-12-05
Posts 26 |
I hear these little voices They tell me what to do They tell me just to go and forget about you! I must admit i've tried but my love for you remains true. True no madder what. Someday you'll leave me though and move on to her but i must say oh well now she's my friend and that means most of all You can go away and forget you ever knew me cause i've gained something better instead If you ever hurt her i'll really make you pay If you hurt me i'll live but you hurt her you wont. That's not till then though For now your mine So i love you and i will till i die!! |
||
| © Copyright 2001 Cassi - All Rights Reserved | |||
|
Spine Grinder Senior Member
since 2000-10-28
Posts 1127Standing In Silence... |
wow, cassi, i'm glad u feel this way, but i dont think he's gonna move on netime soon, so dont worry gurl! nice write by the way  ~If u luv something, let it go,if it comes back 2 u, its urs, if it doesnt, it never wuz..~DMX |
||
|
TopGunLauren Senior Member
since 2000-08-02
Posts 718California |
Wow....awsome piece I really liked it. lauren "I just needed someone to talk to you were just to busy with yourself."-Staind |
||
|
anonymousfemale Member Elite
since 2000-02-02
Posts 2797Limbo |
Ooooo threats! YEAH! lol You might want to remember to reply, Cassie. It helps.  ~AF~ Why does Sea World have a seafood restaurant? I'm halfway through my fish burger and I realize, Oh my gosh....I could be eating a slow learner. |
||
|
Dark Enchantress Senior Member
since 1999-07-27
Posts 1258meet Morgana |
Showed some good old fashion anger... talkin' trash.... being strong... that sort of thing. Nice. The only thing that I fear is to die quietly. |
||
Acies
Moderator
Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
just let things out thats a good way of doing it thanks for the read là où est mon amour? |
||
xShUgArHiGhx
since 2000-09-26
Posts 3150tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs |
I have to admit that i admire you a lot for being ok with the thought of the person your worth being with your friend AND also being more concerned about her heart than yours...i dont think i could ever do that....Your very strong and i just wanted you to know that i think that...nicely done poem and i hope he doesnt hurt either of you ShE'S nOt ThE kInDa GiRL..WhO lIkeS tO tElL tHe WorLd AbOuT tHe Way She FEEL'S aBouT hErSelf...ShE tAkEs a LiTtLe TiMe In MakIn uP hEr MiNd.. |
||
|
|
⇧ top of page ⇧ |
|
| All times are ET (US). All dates are in Year-Month-Day format. | ||
