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sweetlilangel
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since 2001-12-05
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0 posted 2001-12-06 06:36 AM


A friend so true!

When this all started i hated you
I thought all you wanted was my boyfriend
now i see that wasn't it at all.
Yes you liked him but how could you not?
We both know he's got a way with tugging on a heart.
Now your my friend and that's till the end
Till the end of our lives till we lay down and die.
If he hurts me now oh well i've got something better.
I've got a new friend that means allot.
I'll always be here for you
If tables change and it's you he's got
that's not gonna change things allot.
I'll still be here no madder what
no madder who comes in our way
Your my friend till my dying day!!

I know that this may not flow real well. But staci this ones to you. Remember guys come and go but i'm not leaving i'll be here for you always. Love ya girl~Cassi


© Copyright 2001 Cassi - All Rights Reserved
Spine Grinder
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since 2000-10-28
Posts 1127
Standing In Silence...
1 posted 2001-12-06 06:44 AM


wow, cassi, thank u so much, i greatly appreciate this 1......idk wut else 2 say other than luv ya and stay kewl
luv,

~If u luv something, let it go,if it comes back 2 u, its urs, if it doesnt, it never wuz..~DMX

AngelPoet87
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since 2001-04-21
Posts 280
Indy
2 posted 2001-12-06 06:08 PM


Ain't friendship just the most specialest thing in tha world? Teehee. I thought this was a cute poem, a sweet dedication to a friend. I dunno if you meant the grammer or not, but "allot" is spelled "a lot" and "madder" is spelled "matter" teehee, darn my attention to other people's spelling and not my own! teehee, well, take care.

Liefhe alle ten spijte van duivel... A tes souhaits... A tes amours... Qu ils restent. J'ai t'adore. Je t'aime.

TopGunLauren
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since 2000-08-02
Posts 718
California
3 posted 2001-12-06 06:35 PM


Friendship can be a good thing b ut friendships can also cause a lot of pain I know that for a fact.But this is a nice poem I really liked it.
  Lauren

anonymousfemale
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since 2000-02-02
Posts 2797
Limbo
4 posted 2001-12-07 11:58 AM


Glad to see you have such a great friend.  
This piece came across really nicely.
Thanks for sharing

~AF~

Why does Sea World have a seafood restaurant? I'm halfway through my fish burger and I realize, Oh my gosh....I could be eating a slow learner.



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Twilight Zone
5 posted 2001-12-12 05:42 PM


Cassi ---- yes, true friends are forever, but I'm alittle lost here.  Are you saying that your so called friend is now with your ex? Hmmmmmm....I'm really lost here

là où est mon amour?
donde está mi amour?
wo ist meine Liebe?
Nelly Furtado é a menina a mais bonita no mundo largo do todo.


MindlessPoet
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since 2001-04-20
Posts 106
Texas
6 posted 2001-12-13 11:26 AM


friendship is a wonderful thing    I'm sure you made someone happy, hehe.

For now, all I can do is dream.

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tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs
7 posted 2001-12-13 03:07 PM


Aww this was cute! Friendship is a wonderful thing...

ShE'S nOt ThE kInDa GiRL..WhO lIkeS tO tElL tHe WorLd AbOuT tHe Way She FEEL'S aBouT hErSelf...ShE tAkEs a LiTtLe TiMe In MakIn uP hEr MiNd..

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