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angel_2401
Member

since 2001-06-12

Posts 131
Cincinnati, OH

0 posted 2001-12-03 08:19 PM

"Forever" Grows From Here

She had just met him
He was really sweet
They talked all the time
Friendship grew from there

She was still in love
With someone who moved on
He helped her heal a broken heart
Love grew from there

They are more than just lovers
Still more than just friends
These two here are soulmates
"Forever" grows from here
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Hey all! I've just gotten over writer's block, and I wrote this and another poem today. It's not the best thing, but it came from my heart, for someone special..

Kristin

I'm not just A Princess, I'm THE Princess!!!!! ~*~I love Matt!~*~

Knight of Secrecy
Member

since 2001-10-12

Posts 113
San Juan, Puerto Rico

1 posted 2001-12-03 08:27 PM

I think its nice, I specially liked the title.

-C.M.

"I feel the sting of an insignificant wasp, and yet, I fear that I am alergic"

Fading Away

Member Elite

since 2001-03-14

Posts 3131
Lynchburg, Virginia

2 posted 2001-12-03 08:54 PM

Aww, the last line was sweet. Nicely done, I really enjoyed this. Congrats on getting over writer's block.. that can be so frustrating, I know. Good work!

--Marie

If there's one thing I've learned, it's that the most frustrated people in the world are those who know they're stupid, but keep trying anyway.

TopGunLauren
Senior Member

since 2000-08-02

Posts 718
California

3 posted 2001-12-04 01:38 AM

Great Job I really like this one.
Lauren

xShUgArHiGhx

Member Elite

since 2000-09-26

Posts 3150
tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs

4 posted 2001-12-04 09:58 AM

I really liked this

Nicely done!

ShE'S nOt ThE kInDa GiRL..WhO lIkeS tO tElL tHe WorLd AbOuT tHe Way She FEEL'S aBouT hErSelf...ShE tAkEs a LiTtLe TiMe In MakIn uP hEr MiNd..

banburycross
Senior Member

since 2001-03-27

Posts 946
viginia

5 posted 2001-12-04 01:04 PM

i really liked the way you set up the ending, this was really sweet, i enjoyed it bunches

Sometimes, the things that go unsaid are the only things worth hearing.

Acies

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Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-07

Posts 7665
Twilight Zone

6 posted 2001-12-07 11:46 PM

now that is one of your best write
I really like it a lot
I'm glad that you are happy in life
More power to you and him
keep em poems coming

là où est mon amour?
donde está mi amour?
wo ist meine Liebe?

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