AHHHHHHHH! [repost from teen#4]

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fearing-laughter
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since 2001-04-24

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land of cheese (Wisconsin)

0 posted 2001-07-05 10:19 PM

hey all...i haven't really been on much lately. sorta depressed and just dealing with family stuff. i think i might be back tho...this is a repost cuz i've had a rather large case of writer's block, but hopefully it'll go away. plz read and reply honestly, thanks. -fear-

i yell and i yell.
trying to release all this hate.
if i don't stop yelling,
i will eventually break.
AHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
can't stop
AHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!
won't stop
AHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
for fear that i will go insane.
or have i already arrived at the lovely little milestone?
AAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!!
i ponder the question as i continue to yell.
sane AHHHHHHH
insane AHHHHHH
two similar words
yet two completely different states of mind.
AHHH!!!!!
what the hell? AHHHHH!!!! might as well keep on yelling!
AAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!
AAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!
okay i feel a little bit better
but i still cannot seem to sate
AAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!
this desire i seen to have to release all my hate.
AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!
if i get it all out i will be glad
but if i miss some i'm sure i'll end up feeling rather sad.
ooooooh weeeeeeeell
AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
sadness is an emotion i'm used to.

-fear-

emotions are like evil serpents that coil around your mind---me "i cannot save you, i can't even save myself"--stabbing westward

Spice
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since 2001-04-13

Posts 1266
Resting in my cardboard box.

1 posted 2001-07-05 11:13 PM

I liked this.
HaHa- You should have seen and heard me reading this outloud. hahahaha
Anyway- Yea, I crawl in the car, shut the doors, and scream to relieve stress sometimes. Helps alot. Hope things get better for you. I enjoyed the read.

TopGunLauren
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since 2000-08-02

Posts 718
California

2 posted 2001-07-06 12:21 PM

This is a really awsome poem i really enjoyed it.Keep up the awsome work.
Lauren

Fading Away

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since 2001-03-14

Posts 3131
Lynchburg, Virginia

3 posted 2001-07-06 12:32 PM

I replied to this in Teen #4 I think, but I'll reply to it again

I thought the creativity of this poem is pretty high on the scale. My two favorite lines were, "for fear that i will go insane./or have i already arrived at the lovely little milestone?" I thought that was cute. The last line hit very hard. Nicely done

I enjoyed this poem. Keep posting you work.

--Marie

You can’t expect the roses to grow without the weeds.

JBaker515

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since 2001-02-28

Posts 458
Dartmouth College

4 posted 2001-07-06 12:38 PM

good work..
maybe to many AHHHHHHHHHHs..
who knows though

fearing-laughter
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since 2001-04-24

Posts 605
land of cheese (Wisconsin)

5 posted 2001-07-06 01:14 AM

spice-lol thanks, i'm sure it would of been interesting to see and hear ya read it. lol was anybody else there??

lauren-thanks

marie-ooooh when i clicked on the poem it only said dopey and poeticgirl responded to it, that's sorta why i posted it again. lol my computer must be messed....stupid thing never works. those lines are my favorite too. thanks for ur reply, it means a lot.

jbaker-ya...i wrote this parts of the poem other then the many AHHH's first...i just added those in. i'll have to see if i agree with ya...thanks for your comments.

thanks for replyin ppl, u guys rock!
-fear-

emotions are like evil serpents that coil around your mind---me "i cannot save you, i can't even save myself"--stabbing westward

anonymous albert ?

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since 2001-03-23

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6 posted 2001-07-06 01:32 AM

"sadness is an emotion i'm used to."

wow that hit home for me!...loved how you ended it

...and great way of putting..."ahhh.."...it shows the emotions you were expressing wonderfully...i enjoyed this one greatly.

im addicted to passions in poetry!...are you?

Dopey Dope

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Member Patricius

since 2000-08-30

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San Juan, Puerto Rico

7 posted 2001-07-07 03:55 AM

I remember reading this the first time and thinking "talk about a vent".....so I read this a second time and thought "talk about a vent".....so yea nothing has changed hehe. Still, well done.

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

Kicking Kim
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since 2001-04-16

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Cloud Cucko Land!

8 posted 2001-07-07 01:21 PM

Excellent I liked this one! It spoke your true emotions! Keep writing

^*~Kicking Kim~*^

"Theres no posession, just obsession and growing depression"

Acies

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Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-07

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Twilight Zone

9 posted 2001-07-11 11:56 AM

I have a suggestion. Instea of yelling, try throwing eggs in the tub. That might help a bit more. Hope you aren't in this situation anymore. Thanks for sharing

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Heavens Tears

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since 2001-03-15

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10 posted 2001-07-11 03:09 PM

Interesting idea Acire.

Great poem. AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH. I enjoyed it. AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH. I hope you released some anger through this. AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH. Writers clock sucks huh? AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH. OK, now I feel better. Thanks for the great read.

*Amanda*
I need more time to find the real me...
to fly like the birds... to be set free.

stace_co2003
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since 2001-03-30

Posts 497
In a dream world

11 posted 2001-07-18 07:52 PM

well, I like this poem...it's so stress relieveing to just scream isn't it?

it's fun too...you can freak out the neighbors!! hahahahahahaha

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