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Poet Unknown
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0 posted 2001-11-28 06:30 PM


One day I wished on a star,
I wished true love wasn't so far.
One night I prayed for someone to love,
I was sent an angel from high up above.
One afternoon I asked myself why me?
The answer wasn't at all that tiny.
One morning I woke up next to a beautiful angel,
She puts my mind in a big tangle.
One night I found my baby girl,
She knows she makes my head twirl.
One day I realized just how special you are to me,
I just wish I knew a way to make you see.
When you cry I'll wash away your tears my love,
Don't have to worry bout the push and shove.
One day I made a wish on a star,
Found my true love not so far.
One day, one night,
Keeping you forever in my sight.
One day I found my true love,
Baby you're the angel from above.

Do as you please....strike forth down upon your knees...Darkness Falls on Those Without Souls

© Copyright 2001 Kyle - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2001-11-29 12:06 PM


Poet Unknown,

This is absolutely beautiful! Thank you so much for sharing this with us. I'm glad I took the time to read it tonight.

                                  Dawn

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2 posted 2001-11-29 02:53 AM


kyle! this is sooooo sweet....loved the read loads..its nice to see you posting here and there too..

       

  

i luve mi con-tray! lyke a big an brown stetch olan wiv losa sun!



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3 posted 2001-11-29 09:36 AM


awwww....this is sooooo sweet!!   I really enjoyed this  
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4 posted 2001-11-29 10:17 AM


Awwwwwwwwww this was such a cute poem!!! Sweet as sugah   hehehe...you should give this to the person who does these magical things to you...they'll love it!

ShE'S nOt ThE kInDa GiRL..WhO lIkeS tO tElL tHe WorLd AbOuT tHe Way She FEEL'S aBouT hErSelf...ShE tAkEs a LiTtLe TiMe In MakIn uP hEr MiNd..

Poet Unknown
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5 posted 2001-11-29 05:48 PM


well thanks guys, sorry i havent been writtin much, i lost the dark inspiration and it took awhile to see the best inspiration ive ever had, and i did, shes just gotta get online to get the link =o)

Do as you please....strike forth down upon your knees...Darkness Falls on Those Without Souls

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6 posted 2001-12-01 01:19 AM


This is another sweet one!  Have you told this person how you feel?  You never know what might happen if you do!     I enjoyed this.  Nicely done..

--Marie

If there's one thing I've learned, it's that the most frustrated people in the world are those who know they're stupid, but keep trying anyway.

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