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Teen Poetry #5

No Me No More

cutiepiesugarbabie
Member

since 2002-06-07

Posts 110
A Cloud In the Sky

0 posted 2002-06-22 08:51 PM

I don’t wanna be me
no me no more
I don’t wanna be me
no way no how

I don’t wanna be me
can’t take the pain any longer
I don’t wanna be me
can’t do this any longer

I don’t wanna be me
someone different
I don’t wanna be me
someone else try this

I don’t wanna be me
no where to hide
I don’t wanna be me
no where to go

I don’t wanna be me
have to get away from my troubles
I don’t wanna be me
have to get far away

I don’t want to be me
there’s no other way
I don’t wanna be me
there’s no light at the end

I don’t wanna be me
maybe ill run away
I don’t wanna be me
maybe I’ll go the hard way

I don’t wanna be me
no me no more
I don’t wanna be me
no way no how

Hallucination
Member

since 2001-03-18

Posts 419

1 posted 2002-06-22 10:33 PM

Great write, very powerful, hope that you're ok. It'll get better, believe me, I've been there...

Neosaphire
Junior Member

since 2002-06-21

Posts 20
Oklahoma City

2 posted 2002-06-22 10:59 PM

I don’t wanna be me
no me no more
I don’t wanna be me
no way no how

Wow, great condensation of something that everyone goes through. Those lines give the full impact of the poem; the delivery is very nice.

songsoftheaftermath
Member

since 2002-06-19

Posts 84
a world of disarray

3 posted 2002-06-26 04:08 AM

sounds like it was inspired by pink...wasit?
naw ive felt like this so many times...good write and nice vent

could the darkness be my friend?

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