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Hallucination Member
since 2001-03-18
Posts 419 |
" Kiss From Your Heart " © 2001 Brian Eggertsen, All Rights Reserved I don't have a bridge for this yet. Please read, and let me know what you think... Thanks Brian. V1: Nights have turned, years have passed, since we said " I do ". Rain have fallen, tears have rolled, but it's always been you. And no one can ever take your place in my heart...'Cause, C: A kiss from your heart, is a one way ticket to paradise. A kiss from your heart, is like a breath of fresh air, pure delite. A kiss from your heart... V2: We have touched, we have shared, each breath together. Our memories, and our love, will live on forever. And I will love you down to the very last drop...'Cause, C: A kiss from your heart, is a one way ticket to paradise. A kiss from your heart, is like a breath of fresh air, pure delite. A kiss from your heart... Bridge: ??? C: A kiss from your heart, is a one way ticket to paradise. A kiss from your heart, is like a breath of fresh air, pure delite. A kiss from your heart... [This message has been edited by Hallucination (edited 11-26-2001).] |
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DawnG 
since 2000-06-23
Posts 1494United States |
Brian, This is beautiful. Can't wait to read it when it is completed.  Dawn |
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Chel Senior Member
since 2000-07-01
Posts 511Baltimore, MD, USA |
I liked it. Keep up the great work. Chel "True friends stab you in the front." |
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Yoda Junior Member
since 2001-11-28
Posts 19 |
I was feelin' this... definitely. It caught me right away in the first verse, which is always good. Very beautiful and honest.  You know its been a good day when you come home, realize you forgot your key again, and decide to climb through the doggie door instead of complaining |
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