Teen Poetry #5 |
If only (repost) |
SunShine913
since 2001-08-19
Posts 211Italy but from NC |
I can taste the heat of his lips on mine smoldering tongues entwine ~ I can feel his fingers stroke my skin Oh, baby touch me again ~ I can smell the musk of his cologne If only I wasn’t lying here all alone ________________ hey i know this is a repost but i love it lol~!!! *!~!* Andrea *!~!* |
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Android 17
since 2001-07-21
Posts 664Winnipeg |
Haha! Very cool...and er---kinky! Hehehe! ^_^ Reminds me of my dates...minus the cologne parts! "Fighting was the only thing I was good at...but I at least I always fought for what I beleived in..." |
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stace_co2003 Member
since 2001-03-30
Posts 497In a dream world |
ooo, that's a great poem!! I love that...but I hated the lying there alone part. LOL, simply because yer alone x_X and you were talkin about him...okay, I'm gonna shutup now, lol. *~*Love is the key that can unlock your happiness...to truly love, is to love yourself*~* |
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vixengrl04 Member
since 2001-04-26
Posts 495East Haddam, CT |
Aww the last line made me sad!! But you did really good, I don't think I read this one the first time around. ~*Nikki*~ *~Fighting for your love~* |
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Acies
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
loved the read, thanks for sharing là où est mon amour? |
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Spice Senior Member
since 2001-04-13
Posts 1266Resting in my cardboard box. |
Ya,repost, Iknow I've read it before...LOL So might as welll take a second and tell ya how kick tooshie it is! LOL, I must say, this poem is short, simple, but keep my full attention each and every time I read it. "I'd rather die purposely alone than to have lived an accidental life of solitude."- Jesa "§ùgã®" Thompson |
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xShUgArHiGhx
since 2000-09-26
Posts 3150tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs |
OoOOoO makes me all tingly inside lol Kisses definately can be magical...i enjoyed this..keep em coming! ShE'S nOt ThE kInDa GiRL..WhO lIkeS tO tElL tHe WorLd AbOuT tHe Way She FEEL'S aBouT hErSelf...ShE tAkEs a LiTtLe TiMe In MakIn uP hEr MiNd.. |
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