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SunShine913
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0 posted 2001-11-22 01:45 AM



I can taste the heat of his
lips on mine
smoldering
tongues entwine
~
I can feel his fingers
stroke my skin
Oh, baby
touch me again
~
I can smell the musk
of his cologne
If only I wasn’t lying
here all alone

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hey i know this is a repost but i love it lol~!!!

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1 posted 2001-11-22 11:13 AM


Haha! Very cool...and er---kinky! Hehehe! ^_^
Reminds me of my dates...minus the cologne parts!

"Fighting was the only thing I was good at...but I at least I always fought for what I beleived in..."

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2 posted 2001-11-23 10:23 AM


ooo, that's a great poem!! I love that...but I hated the lying there alone part. LOL, simply because yer alone x_X and you were talkin about him...okay, I'm gonna shutup now, lol.

*~*Love is the key that can unlock your happiness...to truly love, is to love yourself*~*

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3 posted 2001-11-23 10:32 AM


Aww the last line made me sad!!  But you did really good, I don't think I read this one the first time around.  

~*Nikki*~

     *~Fighting for your love~*
    *~Is something I cannot do~*
   *~I'm not good enough to win~*
*~And I'm not strong enough to lose~*

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4 posted 2001-11-28 12:32 PM


loved the read, thanks for sharing

là où est mon amour?
donde está mi amour?
wo ist meine Liebe?


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5 posted 2001-12-24 01:38 AM


Ya,repost, Iknow I've read it before...LOL
So might as welll take a second and tell ya how kick tooshie it is! LOL, I must say, this poem is short, simple, but keep my full attention each and every time I read it.

"I'd rather die purposely alone than to have lived an accidental life of solitude."- Jesa "§ùgã®" Thompson
  

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tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs
6 posted 2001-12-24 10:55 AM


OoOOoO makes me all tingly inside lol Kisses definately can be magical...i enjoyed this..keep em coming!

ShE'S nOt ThE kInDa GiRL..WhO lIkeS tO tElL tHe WorLd AbOuT tHe Way She FEEL'S aBouT hErSelf...ShE tAkEs a LiTtLe TiMe In MakIn uP hEr MiNd..

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