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Hallucination Member
since 2001-03-18
Posts 419 |
The carved picture in your heart gives me, A reason to breathe… A dream that life can be complete. I wish you could be my Juliet Dressed in Rosen red… One endless night I won’t forget. I don’t ever want to say goodnight If I can’t be with you, I don’t ever want to close my eyes If I can’t be with you, If you could just see I'm not acting That it’s true feeling… That I write my own lines within. And if I only had just one chance To ask you to dance… Oh in a lost night of romance. I don’t ever want to say goodnight If I can’t be with you, I don’t ever want to close my eyes If I can’t be with you, I just wanna hold you in my arms there's nothing I won't do I've been smiling ever since I saw your eyes I just wanna share my life with you Please let me sing you my song I don’t ever want to say goodnight If I can’t be with you, I don’t ever want to close my eyes If I can’t be with you, |
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xShUgArHiGhx 
since 2000-09-26
Posts 3150tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs |
This was such a sweet poem...full of emotion and love  I enjoyed it lots! Good job ShE'S nOt ThE kInDa GiRL..WhO lIkeS tO tElL tHe WorLd AbOuT tHe Way She FEEL'S aBouT hErSelf...ShE tAkEs a LiTtLe TiMe In MakIn uP hEr MiNd.. |
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DawnG
since 2000-06-23
Posts 1494United States |
Hallucination, Is this a song? If not you should consider it for one. It is very beautiful regardless. Dawn |
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Jenn Cirrincione
since 2000-07-02
Posts 2107Fl |
  Snif snif...so sad.... written well tho. Jenn "I want love on my own terms; after everything I've ever learned. Me, I carry too much baggage..." |
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AngelPoet87 Member
since 2001-04-21
Posts 280Indy |
How beautiful, written extremely well. Excellent job, keep em comin. Liefhe alle ten spijte van duivel... A tes souhaits... A tes amours... Qu ils restent. J'ai t'adore. Je t'aime. |
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