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To be with you |
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XFalloutX Junior Member
since 2001-05-13
Posts 31NC |
I sit here alone All I can think of is you Running through my head Wishing I could be with you In my arms I wish That’s all I ask Is to be with you That’s all I need Is to be with you Your smile Your eyes Oh how beautiful they are That’s happiness Is to be with you To hold your hand To hear your voice Wishing I could be with you All I can think of is you *I think I have finally met the girl of my dreams =)* [This message has been edited by XFalloutX (edited 11-16-2001).] |
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Lisa_bebe15 Member
since 2001-11-15
Posts 151Florida |
I love it..thats how I feel when I am with my b/f Jeffy..nice words..I wish I could write like that.. |
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Alyssa
since 2001-05-30
Posts 385IM ENGAGED!!!!! |
hey wow i liked this its really sweet! awww I LuV 2 fReAk out saLEpeEpZ. ThEy AsK me If tHey CaN heLp Me, & I sAy,'HaVe U gOT NEthINg Id like?'TheN thEy aSk mE wuT sIZe I sAy "X-tr MedIuM" |
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Linc
since 2001-03-07
Posts 552The Backstreet Boy |
Hey, Wow, I haven't been here in a long time and I come back because I have a bit of free time and I find this. I had to reply to this one, it reminds me so much of how I feel about Stacey. It's truly a great poem I'm going to put it im my library. Thank you for the great ready. |
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lone_poet707 Member
since 2001-11-17
Posts 70black hole named Aylmer |
great poem...explains my feelings right now... |
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DawnG
since 2000-06-23
Posts 1494United States |
XFalloutX, Sounds like you are a very lucky person. Congrats. Dawn |
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cherish Senior Member
since 2001-03-25
Posts 1639swimming in fairy floss........... |
CUTE as! nice write fallout..i think youve captured what youre feeling perfectly. thanks for sharing this and good luck with the girl  |
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XFalloutX Junior Member
since 2001-05-13
Posts 31NC |
WOW!!! I didnt think it was that good. lol Thanks for the replys  |
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SunShine913
since 2001-08-19
Posts 211Italy but from NC |
OMG i should really read more of your work you are awsome i really really really really liked this one~! *!~!* Andrea *!~!* |
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xShUgArHiGhx
since 2000-09-26
Posts 3150tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs |
Awww this was such a beautiful poem!! Im really happy for you that you think you've finally found the girl of your dreams CONGRATS!ShE'S nOt ThE kInDa GiRL..WhO lIkeS tO tElL tHe WorLd AbOuT tHe Way She FEEL'S aBouT hErSelf...ShE tAkEs a LiTtLe TiMe In MakIn uP hEr MiNd.. |
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