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Love Should Be A Crime (part 2!!)
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Love Should Be A Crime (part 2!!) |
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Honey Member
since 2001-10-09
Posts 92Hot girl From Canada |
Hey everyone!! Well this is the continuation of love should be a crime. I thought you all might like to know what happend in that situation so her it is, tell me whatcha think  I guess I was right You never really cared, These feelings of happiness I thought we both shared. You led me to beleive That you would be here, But then you decided to leave Which ws my greatest fear. I wanted to take things slow So you could get to know me, But you played me for a fool And now the light I see. Now you have your eyes on her I guess she's better than me, I gave you my heart And you just threw it back at me. So if your intentions were to see me cry Your plan to play me worked, I was so nice to you But you treated me like dirt. So once again I'm left alone But I dont really care, Becasue I will go find someone Who wont leave me in dispair. It Feels As If I've Always Been Someone On The Outside Looking In. |
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Acies
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
I love your last 2 lines That's the way you should take things Thanks for sharing keep it up là où est mon amour? |
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NathanS Member
since 2001-09-27
Posts 106CA |
I really liked the continueation, very nicely done. I agree with acire on the last to lines as well. -Dreys |
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DawnG
since 2000-06-23
Posts 1494United States |
This is great Honey. I too liked the positiveness of the last 2 sentences. Dawn |
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