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aries_luv_ppl
Senior Member

since 2001-09-20

Posts 1448
Universal Mind

0 posted 2001-11-16 02:20 PM

Since nobody noticed I've posted a thread in English Workshop, now I repost it here.

Looked into the dark, I saw you.
You seemed to be kind, you seemed to be nice.
You held out your hand, smiling at me.
I was scared, I didn’t know what to do.
You comforted me, you prayed for me.
You held me in your arms, you gave me warm.
I wanted to trust you, but I was afraid.
I wanted to hold your hand, I needed you.
Looked into your eyes, I was afraid no more.
I held your hand, I was afraid to be lost.
You held me tight, you led me to light.
You gave me strength to overcome all.
I ought to thank you, but I don’t know how.
I asked your name, but you just smiled.
You didn’t asked for anything,
You just helped me grow to be a stronger man.
I wanted to see you again, I heard a voice said you’re always with me.
I knew this is true and I felt comfort.
I knew this is true because you said it to me.

Lizzy

~A little sour add to taste of life.
~The first two cup of tea is to throw away; what remains is the best of all.
~Blessed are those who find ordina

Acies

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Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-07

Posts 7665
Twilight Zone

1 posted 2001-11-19 01:27 PM

beautiful write, thanks for sharing

là où est mon amour?
donde está mi amour?
wo ist meine Liebe?

xShUgArHiGhx

Member Elite

since 2000-09-26

Posts 3150
tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs

2 posted 2001-11-19 01:29 PM

I enjoyed this a lot

ShE'S nOt ThE kInDa GiRL..WhO lIkeS tO tElL tHe WorLd AbOuT tHe Way She FEEL'S aBouT hErSelf...ShE tAkEs a LiTtLe TiMe In MakIn uP hEr MiNd..

aries_luv_ppl
Senior Member

since 2001-09-20

Posts 1448
Universal Mind

3 posted 2001-11-19 03:28 PM

Thanks for replying! Finally. I thought I was not welcome here because it took so long and still there wasn't any reply in this forum. But maybe because this isn't as good as other which I've posted on other forum.

~The first two cup of tea is to throw away; what remains is the best of all.
~Blessed are those who find ordinary things extraordinary.

Acies

Moderator

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-07

Posts 7665
Twilight Zone

4 posted 2001-11-20 12:20 PM

everyone is always welcome in this forum

là où est mon amour?
donde está mi amour?
wo ist meine Liebe?

Salooma
Senior Member

since 2000-01-28

Posts 781

5 posted 2001-11-20 06:53 PM

very good piece...hard to understand, but great style.

Keep writing

Salma

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