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One step Closer, to her Heart
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One step Closer, to her Heart |
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Hallucination Member
since 2001-03-18
Posts 419 |
I wrote a song in my head the moment I saw her eyes, her face is a melody that's beyond complete, no lie she lite up the room, just like that oh she just looked so fly and I just thought to myself she's what's missin' in my life as she stepped on to the dance floor I thought I was gonna die... I moved in slowly, step by step didn't wanna scare her off but first things first, get the mood set with the right kinda of love... I'm one step closer,to her heart I tried to play it cool as I undressed her with my eyes, now should I ask her to dance I gave it a try, no lie I couldn't help it, she's that hot I had to do this right Asked if she wanted a drink she answered with a cute hi at the bar she gave me a sign that it's not goodbye... As the night came to an end we've gotten so much more than friends Now she's the best thing in my life and I will never leave her side I'm one step closer,to her heart |
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aries_luv_ppl Senior Member
since 2001-09-20
Posts 1448Universal Mind |
Hey that's very good. My friend asked me once time to try to describe his feeling for me at a dance in a poem, so I tried and he said it was close. I think you did the subject much better! Of course in my case, I was just joking with my friend, we are actually just friends. Please read some of my poems, and give me your comment. Lizzy Vivian ~A little sour add to taste of life. ~The first two cup of tea is to throw away; what remains is the best of all. ~Blessed are those who find ordina [This message has been edited by aries_luv_ppl (edited 11-15-2001).] |
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