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0 posted 2001-11-14 05:54 AM


" You're my girl "
© 2001 Brian Eggertsen, All Rights Reserved
I wrote this song for my little puppy, Emma...She's the cutest little thing in the world.
I know that it could well use a few more verses. and I'm on it...

Brian....Ezt....


Verse 1:
Everyday when I come home
you always greet, me with a wet kiss
and wack with your tail, letting me know
just how much you love me...

Chorus:
You're my girl
with a soft, wet nose.
You're my girl
so black and furry.
You're my girl
with hassle Braun eyes
with your love
you light up my life
OH you are my girl.

Verse 2:
Each night when I go to sleep
you move in close, making me feel save
and with a tender touch, you make me see
how much you have to give...

Bridge:
You are and will always be
the only girl I see.
People say it's wrong
that I can't love you that much
but just hear me sing my song...

Chorus:
You're my girl
with a soft, wet nose.
You're my girl
so black and furry.
You're my girl
with hassle Braun eyes
with your love
you light up my life
OH you are my girl

© Copyright 2001 Brian Eggertsen - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2001-11-14 09:55 AM


This was such an adorable poem!!! Probably one of the most adorable poems i've ever read!! I love dogs...they truely are loveable and cuddleable (lol did i spell that right?) animals...this was so cute!

ShE'S nOt ThE kInDa GiRL..WhO lIkeS tO tElL tHe WorLd AbOuT tHe Way She FEEL'S aBouT hErSelf...ShE tAkEs a LiTtLe TiMe In MakIn uP hEr MiNd..

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