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krystlebabe19 Junior Member
since 2001-11-09
Posts 27 |
I dont fit in where do I go Who am I anymore I surly don't know This person this body Isn't really me why arn't I who I used to be I changed myself for him I wanted to be just like her Popular and pretty who could ever ask for more To have the perfect body To have the perfect look I'd do anything to be her, just one day in time Im so sick of me and who I turned out to be I look back in the mirror only to be disgusted and hurt By~Krystle |
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Missthang Member
since 2001-07-03
Posts 103 |
awww sweetie! this was a hard poem for me to read b/c i have this "ability" to feel peoples pain. you got to love youreself for who you are and don't try to be anyone that you aren't. as a wise woman once said, "you must love yourself before you love another. by accepting yourself and fully being what you are, your simple presence can make others happy" -jane roberts *hugs* ab *The heart is a house for love* |
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xShUgArHiGhx 
since 2000-09-26
Posts 3150tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs |
I just love your poems!!! I completely relate to them in one way or another...great job!!! I enjoyed this... ShE'S nOt ThE kInDa GiRL..WhO lIkeS tO tElL tHe WorLd AbOuT tHe Way She FEEL'S aBouT hErSelf...ShE tAkEs a LiTtLe TiMe In MakIn uP hEr MiNd.. |
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Acies
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
I just wish one day we all would learn to be content with who we truly are  là où est mon amour? |
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anonymous albert ?
since 2001-03-23
Posts 2979 |
I think everyone is beautiful in their own way. i hate to see girls feel the way they do when they arent satisfied with themselves...look in the mirror and try to find the that you are truly beautiful. cause you are. Hey...#25437 |
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Voiceless Senior Member
since 2001-02-19
Posts 686Under the stars upon the wind |
who knows why we change ourselves at least you prove to the world that you were better being yourself then anyone else, great message. great poem too can't get much better than that. Freedom is not Free (Korean War memorial) |
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Fading Away
since 2001-03-14
Posts 3131Lynchburg, Virginia |
This is a well written poem. This is a piece I'm sure many will identify with. Nicely done, Krystle. *hugs* --Marie If there's one thing I've learned, it's that the most frustrated people in the world are those who know they're stupid, but keep trying anyway. |
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anonymousfemale Member Elite
since 2000-02-02
Posts 2797Limbo |
Unfortunately, when our head wants something, we go to any lengths to get it. You've expressed yourself well in this piece. Things always get better in the end though so keep smiling. ~AF~ If this is all the world has to offer, I want a refund on my life. |
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punkrockerrobin
since 2001-05-15
Posts 1180Sparks, NV |
i liked this poem a lot! great work! robin repeat after me: punk is the best music ever created! |
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Shygirl82 Member
since 2001-02-19
Posts 245Ilinois |
Like the others...this is one I also can relate to...This was very well written and overall just a great poem. Its amazing how we can build other people up and find the beauty within everyone...but ourselves... Thanks for sharing ~Nikki~ Smile!! You never know who may be falling in love with it... |
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PoetryIsLife
since 2001-10-27
Posts 1763...in my boxers... |
Nicely said Acire, I have to agree. I enjoyed the poem... it reminds me a bit of my style of writing. I hope one day you can look in the mirror and be happy with yourself. I hope soemday I can as well. A couple of thoughts: I'd change "aren't" and I'd move "who could" "just" and "and who" down to the lines below. Hope these ideas help. Good write. Titus |
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Lovely_Kris Member
since 2000-07-11
Posts 176 |
Hello I thought this was great poem and i could relate to this. I don't realy have much to say sorry but keep up the great work and hope to read more. Lovely_kris [This message has been edited by Lovely_Kris (12-29-2001 12:26 PM).] |
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C? Member
since 2001-12-29
Posts 190 |
very nicely done! I don't often read a poem of this topic and not think, "eugh, its THAT poem again." I didn't think that this time, you must be on to something! |
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Ceinwyn Member Elite
since 2000-07-09
Posts 2175VA |
One day you'll look in that mirror and just cry..and you'll see that you went through all those changes for nothing..I know everyone wants to fit in but eventually sooner or later we'll love ourselves..it's taken me forever...and I think I'm starting to be okay with myself and I'm not here to please anyone but myself=) It takes time.. Love, Kristen |
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