wish you never would have let me go

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Teen Poetry #5

wish you never would have let me go

Hallucination
Member

since 2001-03-18

Posts 419

0 posted 2001-11-12 07:03 PM

Verse 1:
Thinkin' 'bout the times we used to go clubbin',
how we used to shake it on the dance floor.
Thinkin' 'bout when you used to go out shoppin',
spendin' my money, why is that no more.
Darlin' I miss you so much,
more than you'll ever know.

Chorus:
And it's eating me from inside
that I can't kiss you goodnight
my heart's runnin' low ,
wish you never would have let me go...

Verse 2:
Standin', lookin' at the spot where we first met,
keep askin' myself where did I go wrong.
So much pain inside that I'd rather be dead,
it hurts to take your face down off the wall.
Darlin' I miss you so much,
more than you'll ever know.

Chorus:
And it's eating me from inside
that I can't kiss you goodnight
my heart's runnin' low ,
wish you never would have let me go...

Bridge:
The sense of lilac blooms,
reminds me of your perfume.
Wish upon the brightest star,
every night with all of my heart.

Chorus:
And it's eating me from inside
that I can't kiss you goodnight
my heart's runnin' low ,
wish you never would have let me go...

Niksta
New Member

since 2001-11-09

Posts 6
Australia

1 posted 2001-11-12 09:41 PM

I really loved this poem.. I would love to hear it as the song..!
Breakup is really hard.. But be strong, everything happens for a reason.
Nik xox

xShUgArHiGhx

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since 2000-09-26

Posts 3150
tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs

2 posted 2001-11-13 10:24 AM

I like this song a lot..i like how you recall all the memories..you express your feelings nicely..wonderful job!

ShE'S nOt ThE kInDa GiRL..WhO lIkeS tO tElL tHe WorLd AbOuT tHe Way She FEEL'S aBouT hErSelf...ShE tAkEs a LiTtLe TiMe In MakIn uP hEr MiNd..

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