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Danielle
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0 posted 2001-11-11 08:18 PM


I hate the winter
It's so cold
Trouble arises easily and out of the blue
Bitter faces and bad moods plauge the streets
So many quick tempers around
How it makes me think of summer and warmth
Good times and fun
Long nights, laughter, friends, and light
But sadly the winter has just come, I have many months to wait before it leaves
Hopefully I will make it thorugh without scars
Oh how I wish it were summer once more
What I would give for a wonderful time

Blessed Be Those Who
Reads My Writing

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Missthang
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1 posted 2001-11-13 12:15 PM


funny, i always looked at winter as being a peaceful time. even though it's cold, it gives you a reason to cuddle with your "special someone". plus i enjoy things like sitting in front of fireplace and stuff. anyhoo, i did like you poem. good write.
ab

*The heart is a house for love*

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2 posted 2001-11-13 09:58 AM


i hate the winter too!!!! good poem!

ShE'S nOt ThE kInDa GiRL..WhO lIkeS tO tElL tHe WorLd AbOuT tHe Way She FEEL'S aBouT hErSelf...ShE tAkEs a LiTtLe TiMe In MakIn uP hEr MiNd..

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3 posted 2001-12-21 03:54 PM


I too hate winter
specially driving in the snow

là où est mon amour?
donde está mi amour?
wo ist meine Liebe?
Nelly Furtado é a menina a mais bonita no mundo largo do todo.


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4 posted 2001-12-23 01:07 AM


::bump::

ShE'S nOt ThE kInDa GiRL..WhO lIkeS tO tElL tHe WorLd AbOuT tHe Way She FEEL'S aBouT hErSelf...ShE tAkEs a LiTtLe TiMe In MakIn uP hEr MiNd..

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