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Jeremiah Johnson
Senior Member

since 2000-06-08

Posts 1223
Brooksville, Fl, U.S

0 posted 2001-11-07 02:32 PM

When we're together the world stands still
Us meeting must have been gods' will
When we're together the birds always sing,
It's like your holding me under an angel's wing
When we're together the flowers always bloom,
My world without you would be like doom.

When we're together the sky is never gray,
You have made my life a glorious day
When we're together and your lips touch mine,
The feeling is so divine
When we're together i can't help but to touch
Because i love you so much

When we're together on teh beach at night,
I'm so glad that things have been just right
When we're together and you take my hand,
I am always so happy that you understand
When we're together I know I can trust,
That this feeling is more than just a lust.

Written for an old love but I regretfully never told her how i truely felt.

I'm a dying romantic and when i can no longer write i can no longer live -Jeremiah Johnson-

DawnG

Senior Member

since 2000-06-23

Posts 1494
United States

1 posted 2001-11-07 05:44 PM

Jeremiah,

This is a beautiful poem. I wish you could have told her how you felt when you were still with her.

Dawn

Local Parasite

Member Elite

since 2001-11-05

Posts 2527
Transylconia, Winnipeg

2 posted 2001-11-07 07:29 PM

It really is too bad that some feelings do not surface until after their time.
Best wishes.

Theo

TopGunLauren
Senior Member

since 2000-08-02

Posts 718
California

3 posted 2001-11-07 07:33 PM

Sad poem I also wish you had a chance to share this with her while you still were with her.But anyway I love this poem and keep up the awsome work.
Lauren

DancinQueen

Senior Member

since 2000-07-29

Posts 1092
Kokomo,IN,USA

4 posted 2001-11-07 10:13 PM

aww man i still cant believe youre back!! youre the only person that uses that little skeleton thingy as their symbol. thats how i remember you. there were like 50 Jeremy's when you were here. and i always got everyone mixed him. typical me

But neways, wonderful poem..sucks you never let her know, but everything happens for a reason

keep posting!

*dq

**You can't always trust the people you want to**

Jenn Cirrincione

Member Elite

since 2000-07-02

Posts 2107
Fl

5 posted 2001-11-08 12:41 PM

Like DQ said, everything happens for a reason. Perhaps you should find her and let her know all of this. Honesty is the best policy.

Nice write.

Jenn

"I want love on my own terms; after everything I've ever learned. Me, I carry too much baggage..."

CocoBaci
Member Elite

since 2000-05-06

Posts 3043

6 posted 2001-11-08 01:14 AM

When we're together i can't help but to touch
Because i love you so much
When we're together and you take my hand,
I am always so happy that you understand

Jeremiah, this is beautifully expressed and my compliments2u on a splendid write you share with us here...

*~coco~*

anonymousfemale
Member Elite

since 2000-02-02

Posts 2797
Limbo

7 posted 2001-12-07 09:01 AM

Nice write Jeremiah. You've captured many great emotions here and I commend you for writing them all out.

~AF~

Why does Sea World have a seafood restaurant? I'm halfway through my fish burger and I realize, Oh my gosh....I could be eating a slow learner.

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