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Hallucination Member
since 2001-03-18
Posts 419 |
" Here's to us " © 2001 Brian Eggertsen, All Rights Reserved I will love you, I swear it's true 'till the end of time, I cross my heart so let's make a vow to one another sealed with a kiss till death do us part. Honey there's so much I wanna give but I don't know where to start, So I'll just give you everything... Here's to us let's make a toast to our love and the path that we will walk together We sip the campaign as a symbol of love that I'll be yours and you'll be mine forever Here's to us... On this romantic night I will give you my heart and everything I am and I'll walk through hell for you 'Till eternity I'll be your man. ( And this is what I'm gonna do) I'm gonna treat you right all the way, love you more and more everyday for as long as I live... Here's to us let's make a toast to our love and the path that we will walk together We sip the campaign as a symbol of love that I'll be yours and you'll be mine forever Here's to us... Here's to us let's make a toast to our love and the path that we will walk together We sip the campaign as a symbol of love that I'll be yours and you'll be mine forever Here's to us... [This message has been edited by Hallucination (edited 11-06-2001).] |
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Local Parasite
since 2001-11-05
Posts 2527Transylconia, Winnipeg |
Is this intended as a song? It seemed to read along like one, due to the repetition. Nice though!  Theo |
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xShUgArHiGhx
since 2000-09-26
Posts 3150tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs |
Yea while i was reading it i thought it was a song too..is it? ShE'S nOt ThE kInDa GiRL..WhO lIkeS tO tElL tHe WorLd AbOuT tHe Way She FEEL'S aBouT hErSelf...ShE tAkEs a LiTtLe TiMe In MakIn uP hEr MiNd.. |
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DawnG
since 2000-06-23
Posts 1494United States |
Very beautiful. I agree if its not meant as a song, it should be. Dawn |
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