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DancinQueen
since 2000-07-29
Posts 1092Kokomo,IN,USA 
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-=I found this in an old notebook. I checked to see if I posted it already, and i coulnt find it..so here it is  -=-=Day by Day=-=- Pulling from every direction never showing relief Clawing at my imperfections ruining my self-belief Lazily knocking me down sick games take heed Trying to keep my head up in this sea of greed Blinded by misery in this self-absorbed world Fighting the past yet struggling forward As nightfall tires my weary eyes my mind's finally at ease 'Till morning sheds her light dangling life in front of me **You can't always trust the people you want to** |
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Spice Senior Member
since 2001-04-13
Posts 1266Resting in my cardboard box. |
Hi DQ  AWESOME ending, absolutely fabulous... I loved it. The poem was incredible, a definite library piece...Perhaps I liked it so much cause I connected with it?...Who knows.  Glad you found the write though, I would have hated to have had to miss this. Thanks for the read! You did a great job on expressing yourself at the time. Nobody is perfect until you fall in love with them. [This message has been edited by Spice (edited 11-06-2001).] |
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Local Parasite
since 2001-11-05
Posts 2527Transylconia, Winnipeg |
Wow! I like this very much! You spat upon the state of the planet in a way that few know how to do. I absolutely adore poetry that tells the world "I am sick of you, you're a waste of my time." Especially the last line. I'm very impressed and will keep both eyes open for your name in here again. Theo |
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keoni Senior Member
since 2000-10-16
Posts 850Up in the mountains in the NFC |
This is a great piece. One of my fav's from you. Good thing it didn't get lost in that notebook. Jon "Only God can judge me" Tupac Shakur |
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anonymous albert ?
since 2001-03-23
Posts 2979 |
"Blinded by misery in this self-absorbed world" SO true, Kiley! and awesome ending...overall i liked it LOTS. =) |
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JBaker515
since 2001-02-28
Posts 458Dartmouth College |
I simply adore your writing babe, loved every word, and there was much truth behind the words on that page of paper. Love ya lots, Jeff |
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just_me Junior Member
since 2001-10-24
Posts 19 |
I Think you are write (hehe)... we are identical twins! It's like you are taking my words out of my brain and putting them on paper for me! How cool is that! |
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StarPryncess17 Senior Member
since 2000-05-31
Posts 932Colorado |
An amazing piece, and it's been forever since I've talked to you. Honey, give me a ring whenever you see me online! It's not too often anymore, I've been so busy, but please, say hello!! *Jesilyn* "Tell me why you cry" |
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TopGunLauren Senior Member
since 2000-08-02
Posts 718California |
Every single poem I have ever read of yours I have loved and this one is no exception.You have a very special gift for writting poems and keep up the awsome work. Lauren |
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xShUgArHiGhx
since 2000-09-26
Posts 3150tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs |
Beautifully written kiley!!! Probably one of my fav's from u I really enjoyed this one!!ShE'S nOt ThE kInDa GiRL..WhO lIkeS tO tElL tHe WorLd AbOuT tHe Way She FEEL'S aBouT hErSelf...ShE tAkEs a LiTtLe TiMe In MakIn uP hEr MiNd.. |
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Acies
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
Nice to see you sharing again It was nice talking to you again too been a while  thanks for sharing puff puff là où est mon amour? |
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Jenn Cirrincione
since 2000-07-02
Posts 2107Fl |
Very nicely written Kiley. So happy you found this and shared with us all. Great work...tell the world to kiss your arse!  Jenn "I want love on my own terms; after everything I've ever learned. Me, I carry too much baggage..." [This message has been edited by Jenn Cirrincione (edited 11-07-2001).] |
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DawnG
since 2000-06-23
Posts 1494United States |
I'm glad you found this in the notebook. Great poem. Dawn |
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anonymousfemale Member Elite
since 2000-02-02
Posts 2797Limbo |
Ahh Kiley, one of your brilliant pieces! Thank heavens you found this. It wouldn't have been nice to deprive us of this poem. I love it! Well done and I hope to see many more from you. ~AF~ Why does Sea World have a seafood restaurant? I'm halfway through my fish burger and I realize, Oh my gosh....I could be eating a slow learner. |
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DancinQueen
since 2000-07-29
Posts 1092Kokomo,IN,USA |
hey girl! lil late replying huh? lol just kidding. thanks for replying **You can't always trust the people you want to** |
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Acies
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
She was gone for a while  là où est mon amour? |
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